The Hindenburg
I made a poor choice at lunch time31 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Hahahaha! Funny hilarious! An enjoyable read! Great picture too....lol
We all need some levity sometimes and you have provided it. Thank you very much for a fun read and a good chuckle!
Aesthetically speaking I could find no issues with your grammar sentence structure spelling Punctuation or Anything else. Very well written very humorous clever idea even though it's kind of a uncomfortable situation l o l. Thank you again good luck!
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Hahahaha! Funny hilarious! An enjoyable read! Great picture too....lol
We all need some levity sometimes and you have provided it. Thank you very much for a fun read and a good chuckle!
Aesthetically speaking I could find no issues with your grammar sentence structure spelling Punctuation or Anything else. Very well written very humorous clever idea even though it's kind of a uncomfortable situation l o l. Thank you again good luck!
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Hello Lea,
thanks so much for the delightful review and comments. I'm just glad I didn't suffer as much as I feared I might. It was a bit uncomfortable, not near as bad as it could have been.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom