Loss
life is too short for some34 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Janet, your poem is beautifully penned, albeit said. Of special note:
A mother's sorrow, father's grief.
We question who can be to blame?
(We all try to make sense of these things and try to explain the "unexplainable." This is when One's faith in God will see us through.)
Well-chosen comtemplative photo. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Hi Janet, your poem is beautifully penned, albeit said. Of special note:
A mother's sorrow, father's grief.
We question who can be to blame?
(We all try to make sense of these things and try to explain the "unexplainable." This is when One's faith in God will see us through.)
Well-chosen comtemplative photo. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review. I appreciate your thoughtful response to this tragedy. Truly, this is when one's faith in God is what will see us through.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
One can't make sense when all the boxes are ticked and the consequences of our actions somehow need revision. There are no answers, onky the young man knows, and of course the Lord, Jesus is the light of the world I'm afraid, beautifully written Janet, a super job, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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One can't make sense when all the boxes are ticked and the consequences of our actions somehow need revision. There are no answers, onky the young man knows, and of course the Lord, Jesus is the light of the world I'm afraid, beautifully written Janet, a super job, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you Roy for your kind and encouraging review and special stars. I appreciate your thoughtful response to this tragedy.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is uncanny. I was Just thinking of telling a friend of mine how I want to be more loving, more kind, and then I read your poem.
Great work great poem
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This is uncanny. I was Just thinking of telling a friend of mine how I want to be more loving, more kind, and then I read your poem.
Great work great poem
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review. I appreciate your thoughtful response to this tragedy. I guess we all need to be more loving and kind.
Blessings
Janet
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So true
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a very moving and touching tribute to a young man you knew but you didn't say how he died so I don't know how to feel about your loss except to say I am sorry for your loss.
My condolences to you and his family.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you make sense of his loss somehow.
Jesse
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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This is a very moving and touching tribute to a young man you knew but you didn't say how he died so I don't know how to feel about your loss except to say I am sorry for your loss.
My condolences to you and his family.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you make sense of his loss somehow.
Jesse
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thanks Jesse. We don't know how he died. We are assuming by his own hand since the family is not saying and he was a healthy young man.
Thank you for reading.
Blessings
Janet
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Oh, Janet, I am so sorry!
Blessings back to you,
Jesse