The Return
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, this is getting more and more mysterious. Now we have several candidates who would like to get rid of Meg. So who is it going to be? Well, I'll have to wait and see won't I? I so love this story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Hi Sandra, this is getting more and more mysterious. Now we have several candidates who would like to get rid of Meg. So who is it going to be? Well, I'll have to wait and see won't I? I so love this story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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The clues are coming together, now we have to bring Miles into it. Lots happening next week. Thanks so much, Ulla, I really appreciated your lovely review and the golden star! Have a wonderful week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This chapter has a healthy dose of revelations and closure (finding the letter) and yet at the same time tension and conflict (what Bessie sees). This creates a satisfyingly complex mixture to keep the readers on tenterhooks. Technically, it was much easier to identify who is who last week, as you named the names well. An enjoyable read. Kate xx
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This chapter has a healthy dose of revelations and closure (finding the letter) and yet at the same time tension and conflict (what Bessie sees). This creates a satisfyingly complex mixture to keep the readers on tenterhooks. Technically, it was much easier to identify who is who last week, as you named the names well. An enjoyable read. Kate xx
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I'm so glad you pointed out about the characters, I totally forgot to add them. I've put them in now. Thanks so much for that, and the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this part. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
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Sorry. Typo slipped in. Meant to say that this weeks episode was clearer than last weeks. K
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Lol, I have often done that. Thanks again, Kate. xx
Comment from BethShelby
This was an extremely interesting chapter. There is lot of things going on. It seems there are several people who would like to see Meg death. The letter behind the picture revealed some interesting facts too. I'm anxious to know the meeting Bessie is planning to attend will reveal. I'm looking forward to learning more.
Beth
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This was an extremely interesting chapter. There is lot of things going on. It seems there are several people who would like to see Meg death. The letter behind the picture revealed some interesting facts too. I'm anxious to know the meeting Bessie is planning to attend will reveal. I'm looking forward to learning more.
Beth
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Aw, thank you, Beth. So many, all with different reasons, yet Meg hasn't done anything herself to warrent this awful situation she's been put in. Thanks so much for the lovely review, my friend, and the sixth star! Love and hug, Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So many suspects. So many evil people in one place. I can't wait for the next installment. I know it will be really good. Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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So many suspects. So many evil people in one place. I can't wait for the next installment. I know it will be really good. Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for this lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. And a big hug for the golden star!! Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xx