Wanting More
a 15 Syllable poem36 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The more you write and read, the more you want to write and read:-) I never thought of myself as a poet until I joined this site a few months ago, but have been inspired by the work of others.
Nice 15 syllable poem, and the picture of water with it speaks to the unquenchable aspect. Plenty of water here!
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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The more you write and read, the more you want to write and read:-) I never thought of myself as a poet until I joined this site a few months ago, but have been inspired by the work of others.
Nice 15 syllable poem, and the picture of water with it speaks to the unquenchable aspect. Plenty of water here!
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thanks so much, Pam.
Melissa
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
I can relate. My first efforts at writing were in poetry. Then, I stopped writing poetry and moved on to prose. I have always written, but writing prose has been an entirely different adventure for me. I do have a great deal of respect for good poets and it's clear from this offering that you have a definite talent for it.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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I can relate. My first efforts at writing were in poetry. Then, I stopped writing poetry and moved on to prose. I have always written, but writing prose has been an entirely different adventure for me. I do have a great deal of respect for good poets and it's clear from this offering that you have a definite talent for it.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello Marc... thank you for your wonderful words and comment!! I hope you have a lovely day... this is exactly how I feel about writing poetry.
Melissa
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Sugarray77 a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 15 syllable Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello Sugarray77 a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 15 syllable Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello there! Thank you so much for your lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from rspoet
Hello Melissa,
This is an excellent entry for the fifteen syllable contest
with words most every poet can relate to.
Poetry, like nature, draws you in and holds tight.
Perfect picture choice.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello Melissa,
This is an excellent entry for the fifteen syllable contest
with words most every poet can relate to.
Poetry, like nature, draws you in and holds tight.
Perfect picture choice.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello Robert. Thank you so much, my friend!! I truly feel this way about writing poetry... it's one of my heart loves :)
Melissa
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It shows in your poetry. :)
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This would do equally as well in the 1-line poem contest, Melissa. Well done for fitting it into 15 syllables, and it's nice that one of yours came up for review after you just reviewed mine.
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reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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This would do equally as well in the 1-line poem contest, Melissa. Well done for fitting it into 15 syllables, and it's nice that one of yours came up for review after you just reviewed mine.
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Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hi Sarah. Thank you so much. I enjoyed your verse too :). Have a lovely day.
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa!
A superb summary for one of the reasons I like FanStory. Your selected photograph just enhances that feeling your poem gives me in just 15 syllables.
Methinks this entry will achieve success in the contest voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Melissa!
A superb summary for one of the reasons I like FanStory. Your selected photograph just enhances that feeling your poem gives me in just 15 syllables.
Methinks this entry will achieve success in the contest voting.
Mark
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello, dear Mark, thanks for the lovely comments... I truly feel that way about poetry. I may not be writing much lately, but I still seem to think poetic thoughts constantly...LOL... just need to carve out more time. Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
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You are more than welcome Melissa.
Mark