The Return
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Comment from Pantygynt
Bessie's remark on seeing the tangled bedclothes, 'I's thinking you's either had a bad night, or a good one,' is splendid and right in character. So is Margot's reaction on waking. One of the reasons given to young ladies for not indulging in premarital sex was that if they indulged in it they would feel awful about it in the morning. That one seems to have come about in this case.
I wonder what was written on that piece of paper Bessie picked up - maybe next time.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Bessie's remark on seeing the tangled bedclothes, 'I's thinking you's either had a bad night, or a good one,' is splendid and right in character. So is Margot's reaction on waking. One of the reasons given to young ladies for not indulging in premarital sex was that if they indulged in it they would feel awful about it in the morning. That one seems to have come about in this case.
I wonder what was written on that piece of paper Bessie picked up - maybe next time.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I'm glad you liked that part, it did seem right coming from Bessie. The cold light of day makes everything seem different, what seems right at the times, isn't always so. Poor Margot isn't helping her emotions at all. Thank you so much for the golden star, Jim, and the fabulous review. You'll discover what is on that piece of paper first paragraph in the next part. It throws a new light on absolutely everything!! Warm hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed this post as Margot and Bessie compare notes and ideas. Bessie doesn't seem to need sleep or food. I know she enjoys coffee though. Since Miles will be away for several days and Margot is still occupying Meg's body, I'm wondering if this is going to be strange when Meg returns to her body. There will be a long time gap in her memory which could make her believe there is something seriously wrong with her.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I enjoyed this post as Margot and Bessie compare notes and ideas. Bessie doesn't seem to need sleep or food. I know she enjoys coffee though. Since Miles will be away for several days and Margot is still occupying Meg's body, I'm wondering if this is going to be strange when Meg returns to her body. There will be a long time gap in her memory which could make her believe there is something seriously wrong with her.
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Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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When Margot leaves Meg, Margot asked Bessie about that. Bessie told her she would 'remember' what happened as if it had been her. Apart from those scenes with Bessie. It will be fine. (Don't you just love fantasy!) Thank you so much for another lovely review, Beth, I really appreciate your comments. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Sometimes, man experiences surprises, discoveries, happiness, profit, and sometime losses, nothing is definite, we can't control time and everyone's desires and activation; so living changes from expectation; whatever in hand, we must trust and take into consideration; still hoping for the better; so some startling discoveries are imminent; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Sometimes, man experiences surprises, discoveries, happiness, profit, and sometime losses, nothing is definite, we can't control time and everyone's desires and activation; so living changes from expectation; whatever in hand, we must trust and take into consideration; still hoping for the better; so some startling discoveries are imminent; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so much for another of your lovely review, DR, I really appreciate you taking the time to read my chapters. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx