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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from jusylee72
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This is very well structured and full of emotion. I couldn't agree more. We have to stop this war now and explore every possibility for peace. It is the Putin's of the world who will not listen. I wish he could hear your poem.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Dear friend, yes! I feel that society as a whole is seeking a dynamic change away from the idle rich money grabbers who thirst for power.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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That beautiful child with a war zone behind her is a shame. Why? Is not only my question, it is the world's question. This is so wrong. Thank you for posting this awareness story. Have a great day.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Carolyn, thank you 🙏
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 19-Apr-2022
    Praying with you. You are welcome, and thank you for posting.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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I couldn't agree with your sentiments more. The attack on Ukraine gets me more depressed daily. I know these tragedies happen all over the world, but the Ukraine news is in our face daily.

You did a wonderful job with this poem. You chose your words carefully and the image adds to your message. Best wishes, Lilly

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Lilly thank you! Please ask everyone you know that prays to pray for peace of Ukrainian. 🙏
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is a well written poem with a strong message. You have done a beautiful job choosing words that are delicate and powerful at the same time, not easily done

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    K.L. I thank you so much 🙏
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Trinet writing prompt entry, you executed it well on the word count and I enjoyed the message. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Thank you good sir! Our whole society near and afar needs PEACE. 🙏
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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During a war, innocent people are mowed down like blades of grass. Monsters like Putin find satisfaction in knowing their bodies are lying in the streets. Your trinet is very well written, expressive, and timely.

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Janice, yes this is so sadly true.
Comment from RodG
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Yes, we need to harken to your message. Too many innocent lives are lost and traumatized by war. I truly wonder what and who our world leaders THINK about when they meet to discuss the Russian invasion. Rod

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
    Rod, the great conundrum of our times! How can the world powers be so blatantly ignorant? Putin needs to be imprisoned for crimes against humanity. At home, in Pakistan, Afghanistan, Syria, and now Ukraine. Senseless hunger for personal wealth and power.