Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

An adorable tale of Walrus and Starfish. You drew this? That is great work! You should have your art on FanArtReview.

Loved everything about it - the imagery, visuals, the humor, the amazing presentation.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021

I would hardly call it art, but thank you for doing so. I'm so glad you liked the poem.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I love this my friend and you did a great job on the art work and your very good descriptive words. This is a very neat story for a child to read and picture to see. I am sure they will love it. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

P.S. That's a beautiful picture of you!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021

Thank you, Teri. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The photo before was three years old, and I thought it was time for a change. I'm an old woman. lol

reply by Teri7 on 01-Oct-2021

you are a beautiful sister and lady in the Lord! I love you dear friend!

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021

I love you, too, dear friend.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Charming whimsy. A tour de force of intriguing questions apropos to curious children--clever bits about hooves vs toes and who writes the tunes. Pointy pal--cute!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021

Thank you. A bit of nonsense.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

What a fun approach and theme in a poem, Yvonne. You did great in the lovely rhymes and overall theme of your verse. It brings a smile to see a walrus and a starfish walking hand in hand. :). Well done, my friend.

Melissa



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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021

Thank you. I don't know where that came from. lol