Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from amahra
How wonderful that you would choose a Catheldrale not made by human hands but from the finger of God Himself. I really enjoy your Church poem that was very well written. Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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How wonderful that you would choose a Catheldrale not made by human hands but from the finger of God Himself. I really enjoy your Church poem that was very well written. Great job!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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amahra, thank you ...🙏
Comment from JennStar
I like the poem it created wonderful imagery.
The only thing that I noticed was
"is life, not seen beneath the carpet of verdant forest,
Nourishment feeding the very most tips of the evergreen branches,"
I didn't know if you meant for there to be a period or for that to be nourishment
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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I like the poem it created wonderful imagery.
The only thing that I noticed was
"is life, not seen beneath the carpet of verdant forest,
Nourishment feeding the very most tips of the evergreen branches,"
I didn't know if you meant for there to be a period or for that to be nourishment
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Jenn, oh my! Good catch ... 🙏
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing your poem about how you find a place to worship God in nature. Truly we can experience Him in all of His great creations. We also need the fellowship of other believers to worship with.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thank you for sharing your poem about how you find a place to worship God in nature. Truly we can experience Him in all of His great creations. We also need the fellowship of other believers to worship with.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Anne thank you. 🙏
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You are welcome
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What better place to worship than where you feel God present. This is a lovely write that sings of faith. Church does not have to be a building - a forest nook can be holy. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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What better place to worship than where you feel God present. This is a lovely write that sings of faith. Church does not have to be a building - a forest nook can be holy. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thanks Sherry,🙏
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God has provided so much beauty for us to enjoy. We need to remember to thank Him. I am sure too many of us don't or don't even take the time to notice all He's provided. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Yes, God has provided so much beauty for us to enjoy. We need to remember to thank Him. I am sure too many of us don't or don't even take the time to notice all He's provided. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Barbara, thanks for your review.
Comment from palmart
You provide with this poem a ticket to readers direct to your inner feelings that put a magnifying glass on every single detail that Nature has developed in long centuries. Adjectives bring colour scenes to those who brush your writing so smoothly. Thank you for opening our eyes to the "Cathedrale in Nature"
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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You provide with this poem a ticket to readers direct to your inner feelings that put a magnifying glass on every single detail that Nature has developed in long centuries. Adjectives bring colour scenes to those who brush your writing so smoothly. Thank you for opening our eyes to the "Cathedrale in Nature"
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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thank you 🙏
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You`re welcome, Writer!
Comment from Mary Shifman
Yours is a marvelous poem. There is no more spectacular cathedral than the world of nature. You have created movement all through your poem which is no small feat. Your imagery is vivid and interesting. One small thing: if this is for the free verse contest ending today, there are too many lines. I think there can be no more than eighteen so you might want to check.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Yours is a marvelous poem. There is no more spectacular cathedral than the world of nature. You have created movement all through your poem which is no small feat. Your imagery is vivid and interesting. One small thing: if this is for the free verse contest ending today, there are too many lines. I think there can be no more than eighteen so you might want to check.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Mary, thank you for the heads-up, thankfully this free verse contest ends August 31st which is not as respected and the aforementioned.
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Be well
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My pleasure.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Church poetry (free verse) contest entry speaks volumes of thoughts in a good flow of thoughts about the glory of place of worship the church; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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This Church poetry (free verse) contest entry speaks volumes of thoughts in a good flow of thoughts about the glory of place of worship the church; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much! 🙏
Comment from papa55mike
Many of the times, I feel closer to God than ever is deep in the woods or watching a hummingbird drink from the Cypress vine. It's seeing God's true creation before us. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Many of the times, I feel closer to God than ever is deep in the woods or watching a hummingbird drink from the Cypress vine. It's seeing God's true creation before us. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thank so very much Mike! Wow! A feel good moment in time is appreciated. 🙏
Comment from Sally Law
This has become my kind of sanctuary too. I feel God's presence everywhere really, but especially in His created world. I feel his tender touch and loving voice. Beautiful offering, mystery poet and aptly illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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This has become my kind of sanctuary too. I feel God's presence everywhere really, but especially in His created world. I feel his tender touch and loving voice. Beautiful offering, mystery poet and aptly illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Thanks Sally, we are kindred in Spirit!🙏