A hitchhiker's guide
Hitchhiking in the country33 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I can remember when growing up, there were old holes in the ground that must have open cut mines from the pioneer days, they had filled up with water and excellent for swimming they were grounded in rock, so there wasn't any mud around them. Beautifully written Mary, you reminded me of the days before civilisation encroached on suburban life. Beautifully written, brought back my childhood in a rush, blessings, great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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I can remember when growing up, there were old holes in the ground that must have open cut mines from the pioneer days, they had filled up with water and excellent for swimming they were grounded in rock, so there wasn't any mud around them. Beautifully written Mary, you reminded me of the days before civilisation encroached on suburban life. Beautifully written, brought back my childhood in a rush, blessings, great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you Roy, I truly value your reviews. It is truly appreciated.
Regards and blessings
Mary
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Most welcome Mary
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you so much for sharing your unique childhood memories! I would be so worried as a parent to have you go hitchhiking but you had your cousins. I'm glad your uncle built a swimming hole that removed the need to hitchhike!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for sharing your unique childhood memories! I would be so worried as a parent to have you go hitchhiking but you had your cousins. I'm glad your uncle built a swimming hole that removed the need to hitchhike!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you for your review. It is truly appreciated.
Regards
Mary
Comment from lancellot
Avery interesting look back at a more easy going time before the country became this. I would recommend adding spacing with the dialogue near the end.
notes:
Scratching his unshaven face, he shouted out{,} "Come on little ones get on the
"To the Hosmer Road{,}" Cocoa answered.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Avery interesting look back at a more easy going time before the country became this. I would recommend adding spacing with the dialogue near the end.
notes:
Scratching his unshaven face, he shouted out{,} "Come on little ones get on the
"To the Hosmer Road{,}" Cocoa answered.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you for your review. But more important, you correction and advice.
Regards
Mary