Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from Begin Again
Your chosen artwork appears as the brilliant glowing light from heaven and it's an exceptional choice. Asking the Father, the Son and the Holy Spirit to answer your prayer and prepare you for eternity.
Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Your chosen artwork appears as the brilliant glowing light from heaven and it's an exceptional choice. Asking the Father, the Son and the Holy Spirit to answer your prayer and prepare you for eternity.
Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Carol, I appreciate your review and insight.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
good presentation.
-I like your prayer poem.
-You have good introductory
words in each line and good meter.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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-Very nice image and
good presentation.
-I like your prayer poem.
-You have good introductory
words in each line and good meter.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for the compliment. 🙏
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You are very welcome.
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words to be meaningful, clear and creative. I remember these Latin words. The prayer flows and connects well.
I pondered on the Trinity. The artwork is awesome and compliments
this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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I found the author's words to be meaningful, clear and creative. I remember these Latin words. The prayer flows and connects well.
I pondered on the Trinity. The artwork is awesome and compliments
this poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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Thank yon very much🎶🎶💕
Comment from Jessica Borras
This is a very well written poem and prayer. It's always difficult for me when the lines are so limited, so very well done! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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This is a very well written poem and prayer. It's always difficult for me when the lines are so limited, so very well done! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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Thank you Jessica, 🙏🎶💕
Comment from equestrik
I think your presentation here holds a lot of power in the request to absolve, purify and sanctify-I suppose that it must be done in that order-being absolved fascinates me.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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I think your presentation here holds a lot of power in the request to absolve, purify and sanctify-I suppose that it must be done in that order-being absolved fascinates me.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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Thank you?.🙏🎶💕
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is so simple - but I love it. I will write it down in my prayer book. Sometimes the simplest things are best. Your artwork is gorgeous and certainly Germaine to the words.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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This is so simple - but I love it. I will write it down in my prayer book. Sometimes the simplest things are best. Your artwork is gorgeous and certainly Germaine to the words.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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Smiling back! 🙏🎶💕