Comment from DonandVicki

Exceptional

This poem is truly a masterpiece, I could give it no less than a six. The Master potter has thrown many pots, some turn out better than others but we all are works of the Master.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks Donandvicki for these excellent comments and terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

"If each one of us is precious in God;s sight, what more worth can we have than what we think God should have made us. We are unique. Be encouraged." I am so glad that we can just trust the Lord to mold us and shape us after His will.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks again Anne, for these super comments and lovely review, blessings Roy

reply by Anne Johnston on 19-Jul-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

God created us in His image. He is one of a kind. We should be grateful for every thing that He has done for us. When He died on the cross, He suffered greatly. We must never forget that....

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Rosemary, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautiful and encouraging poem Roy.
Thank you for your notes too that give depth and background to the wisdom of your piece.

Beautifully done my friend.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Janet, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I do not know much about poetry form, but I look for inspiration, knowledge and beauty when I read poetry. This one hits all the marks.
This is a beautifully written poem. Believing and trust is the foundation of faith and that He made us in his image.
Blessings
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Mary, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Roy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem.
-It flows well with effective
meter, imagery, and rhyme, like
"This maze, my mind, this shallow sea,
will never know how grows a tree."
-A very good conclusion comparing
the innocent child to questions
of the adult.
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Pam, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Jul-2021

You are very welcome, Roy.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Thank you for the encouraging word within this beautifully written poem. I needed this today. A fresh drink of living water. Thank you, Roy. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Sally, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The last stanza of this poem reminded me of the song, "Have Thine own way, Lord" In it has the line 'I am the Potter, You are the Clay' . I have many favorite songs, but this is one of my favorites. I haven't heard it for a while, but it seems I am need of hearing it again. Thank you.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Barbara, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Roy,
I like the artwork as the pails to collect the clay to create life as God created humans. I also like the designs, for they are a metaphor for the confusion in the poem.
I like that this discusses both the simple faith of a child and how faith cures all ills.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Joan, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by dragonpoet on 20-Jul-2021

Don't mention it, Roy.
Joan

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Roy.
What a delightful poem you've written. It's so positive in its tone and in its message. I really enjoyed reading this. To me it seems a very complicated form, but your words flows so very well. All the best, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021

Thanks so much Ulla, for these super comments and terrific review, blessings Roy