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Electrical tape gives parents quite a shock
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Comment from
LisaMay
So much for the baby being pampered with 2 attendants - pity they were so inexperienced and wasted all the diapers. It makes for a guffaw of a story though. (I've never seen finagle used in 2 stories in quick succession before - such an odd word. I know what it means but it's not part of my own vocabulary.)
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
The gist is true--I don't think they wasted the diapers.
I realized I used finagle in my first story--thought it would be acceptable to repeat in separate stories!
Comment from
Theodore McDowell
Another Liz original told with the usual twist. You are able to find the amusing and the original in everyday occurrences. This one made me smile. Good job.
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
The gist is true--I don't think they wasted the diapers. Nice to see you!
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