Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

This story is as hear-wrenching to read as it was for you to write, Carol. There is nothing worse than having to tell someone you have loved for a long time that it is time to let go of life and say goodbye. Hugs.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2021

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

My emotions are dripping all over my computer at the moment. That was probably one of the hardest stories I've ever written. I felt like I was relieving it with every stroke of the keys. Thanks for the review. Trying to smile, Carol

Comment from Dilettante junior

Exceptional

Dearest Mama Bear,

What a heart-rending true story flash! I have gone through the same with my dad. These final moments are very hard to erase.

You kept the narration fresh, very boldly descriptive and deeply sentimental at the same time even though I know how much it took to bring these memories up!

Trust me, writing is indeed cathartic here.
Well done!
Love,
DJ

 Comment Written 12-May-2021

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reply by the author on 12-May-2021

Thanks for all the love, Baby Bear...
Papa Bear would appreciate it very much as Mama Bear does too. It was one of the hardest stories I've had to write and I can't stop crying yet. I am pleased that my true emotions came out in my words. Trying to smile, Carol

reply by Dilettante junior on 12-May-2021

Oh they sure transpired through your writing. Awww to Papa Bear this is!!!
Hear hear!
Cheers,
DJ