Martha's Story
My view of a Biblical event31 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like that you repeated that phrase at the end that was included near the middle. You described the dinner prep well. I could see everything you mentioned from the bread making to the peeling of the potatoes and everything in between. I could feel her anxiousness about the Man she was preparing the food for. Your words are filled with great imagery. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like that you repeated that phrase at the end that was included near the middle. You described the dinner prep well. I could see everything you mentioned from the bread making to the peeling of the potatoes and everything in between. I could feel her anxiousness about the Man she was preparing the food for. Your words are filled with great imagery. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thaank you for reading my work, Jan.