Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes, indeed, I'm sure we'll have lots of regrets on that "day", things we could have done better, but didn't, but then most I'm sure are like, there was only one. And that celebration is coming up. Beautifully written, a sensitive and most poignantly tup work. A smooth, articulate rendition, aabb rhyming and a fine work, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion: "Careless attitudes "eschew"

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021

Wow, I can't believe I missed the word "eschew," how nice of you to point this out. Your kind suggestion is duly noted and changed, as soon as I read this review.
Thanks, Roy, for your kindness and generosity in revealing such a silly mistake. Blessings to you as well,
Jesse

reply by royowen on 19-Mar-2021

Always a pleasure Jesse

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021

Thanks, again, Roy!

reply by royowen on 19-Mar-2021

Welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Fine rhymes and meter and a poignant message within, such beautiful scenes should never be allowed to wither because of human neglect, much enjoyed Jesse, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021

Thank you, Dolly. You are the first responder! Your comments tell me I made the right decision to post this poem. I appreciate your kindness.
Jesse