Forever
A Love poem not using the word love45 total reviews
Comment from C2
Together we'd remember how to run. I love this line. I've been married for almost 27 years now and I understand molding the fragments into one. Well done
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Together we'd remember how to run. I love this line. I've been married for almost 27 years now and I understand molding the fragments into one. Well done
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you C2 for this lovely review. We do understand that we have to mold together and yet be ourselves. I kind of tight rope. :))))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancyjam
I love your beautiful love poem to our husband. The words are sincere and meaningful.
Beautiful well rhymed lines and strong even meter.
No wonder he loved it.
Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I love your beautiful love poem to our husband. The words are sincere and meaningful.
Beautiful well rhymed lines and strong even meter.
No wonder he loved it.
Nancy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Nancy for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful love poem. I understand why your husband loved it. I like how you wrote it about 'things' of love without using the word love. Your lines flow well, the rhymes work well, too, the repeated line fits in nicely, and the message is loud and convincing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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This is a beautiful love poem. I understand why your husband loved it. I like how you wrote it about 'things' of love without using the word love. Your lines flow well, the rhymes work well, too, the repeated line fits in nicely, and the message is loud and convincing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jan for this lovely review and good wishes
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Love is unexplainable like you say as follows:
"If you would ever leave and go away, I'd miss you with my ev'ry waking breath. My vibrant world would change to midnight greyas if the dazzling sun fell to its death." This can drive people crazy.
Love can add excitement to life as you say in the following:
"But if you stay with me and hold my hand together we'd remember how to run. To share our lives forever was the plan -- and mold our many fragments into one.
Happy writing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Love is unexplainable like you say as follows:
"If you would ever leave and go away, I'd miss you with my ev'ry waking breath. My vibrant world would change to midnight greyas if the dazzling sun fell to its death." This can drive people crazy.
Love can add excitement to life as you say in the following:
"But if you stay with me and hold my hand together we'd remember how to run. To share our lives forever was the plan -- and mold our many fragments into one.
Happy writing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I thought that was a beautiful poem and leaving out the word love, made it so much more 'loving'! You've chosen words to show how much being together means to you, and shown him in ways that are lasting and fulfilling. I love that you have FOREVER engraved in your rings. So romantic. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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I thought that was a beautiful poem and leaving out the word love, made it so much more 'loving'! You've chosen words to show how much being together means to you, and shown him in ways that are lasting and fulfilling. I love that you have FOREVER engraved in your rings. So romantic. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Sandra for this lovely review and the good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I can understand why he loved it. It sings with your true feelings and gives him a meaning for his life. Your chosen words were all very articulate and the imagery created was clear as a bell.
Ralf
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I can understand why he loved it. It sings with your true feelings and gives him a meaning for his life. Your chosen words were all very articulate and the imagery created was clear as a bell.
Ralf
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Ralf for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I fell in love with your poem from the start.
Each word touched my heart.
I can sense your true feeling with every line to the being to the end. How bless you have each other until the end .
I believe there will be no end for you guys.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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I fell in love with your poem from the start.
Each word touched my heart.
I can sense your true feeling with every line to the being to the end. How bless you have each other until the end .
I believe there will be no end for you guys.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this endearing review and the sixth star is a special bonus and blessings
All the best
Janet
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Your very welcome, you earned it
Take care
Cookie
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Jm, this love poem it's absolutely beautiful. In it you have shown how many ways you can express your love and devotion, without ever saying the word "Love."
I do hope the judges at the CEC think as much of this poem, as I do.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Dear Jm, this love poem it's absolutely beautiful. In it you have shown how many ways you can express your love and devotion, without ever saying the word "Love."
I do hope the judges at the CEC think as much of this poem, as I do.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Suzanna for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, such a perfect and magnificent love, that resists across the time:"
If you would ever leave and go away
I'd wither like a shawl of ancient lace.
Bright stars would quickly fall in disarray --
like tiny specks of dust without a trace." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Wow, such a perfect and magnificent love, that resists across the time:"
If you would ever leave and go away
I'd wither like a shawl of ancient lace.
Bright stars would quickly fall in disarray --
like tiny specks of dust without a trace." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Iza for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from equestrik
I really nenjoyes the sweetness of this love poem and the creativeness in not using the word 'love'. The recipients of this love are indeed fortunate. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I really nenjoyes the sweetness of this love poem and the creativeness in not using the word 'love'. The recipients of this love are indeed fortunate. All the best to you.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome!