Betrayal
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter, Sandra,
and it is very nice to see Tania
in the hospital getting care with her
best friend and Grant there with her.
-The part when Tania used Monica's
nickname was very touching.
-It is nice to see the feelings from
Grant since he has had his own pain
to deal with, and now the emotions
that must be going through him based
on what Tania has been through.
-The two of them offer their support
and do their best to keep her comfortable,
and reassure her she is safe.
-She tries to explain a little, but it
is most important she gets rest.
-I was impressed by Grant having her
in an exclusive London hospital and
telling the doctor he would take care of all bills.
-It is good to see Tania very aware of her
situation, but there is a lot of raw emotion
she will certainly have to deal with.
-At least now, things can move forward
for them all.
-Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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-An excellent chapter, Sandra,
and it is very nice to see Tania
in the hospital getting care with her
best friend and Grant there with her.
-The part when Tania used Monica's
nickname was very touching.
-It is nice to see the feelings from
Grant since he has had his own pain
to deal with, and now the emotions
that must be going through him based
on what Tania has been through.
-The two of them offer their support
and do their best to keep her comfortable,
and reassure her she is safe.
-She tries to explain a little, but it
is most important she gets rest.
-I was impressed by Grant having her
in an exclusive London hospital and
telling the doctor he would take care of all bills.
-It is good to see Tania very aware of her
situation, but there is a lot of raw emotion
she will certainly have to deal with.
-At least now, things can move forward
for them all.
-Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, dear Pam, for another lovely review, and all those shiny stars. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. I liked that you picked up on Monica's nickname, you are the only one that picked that up. We will now see what is in store for Grant and Tania. Sending you a humongous hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. Not everyone is born with an eagle eye!! I thought it was a very nice touch in the otherwise difficult situation. I look forward to the next chapter!
Comment from robyn corum
Sandra,
But he did get her password, right? That was a little confusing to me. And the ending sounded really ominous - like there was something REALLY bad that Grant had to tell her Colin had done to her. Like raped her or something. But then you got into all of it and nothing was so bad really - as to how it sounded, anyway.
Otherwise, really well done. Thanks!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Sandra,
But he did get her password, right? That was a little confusing to me. And the ending sounded really ominous - like there was something REALLY bad that Grant had to tell her Colin had done to her. Like raped her or something. But then you got into all of it and nothing was so bad really - as to how it sounded, anyway.
Otherwise, really well done. Thanks!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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No, she was going to give it to him, but Grant and his men arrived. I'll have to take a look at it again and perhaps make it clearer. The ending is about where is Colin now? Tania is scared he is still out there and will come after her. So, where is Colin? Hmm! Thank you, Robyn, your review shows me where I have to make changes, and I do appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! I think you'll like where it's going. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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Okay - but I thought they got the most recent set of plans? Sorry I'm probably confused - that's my constant state.
Comment from Jay Squires
A very authentic, realistic chapter, Sandra. We were together on all points.
Great line!
Halo of blonde hair! great touch!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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A very authentic, realistic chapter, Sandra. We were together on all points.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Aw, thank you, Jay! You have no idea what your review means to me. I'm made up with it. The six stars are lovely, and so are your comments. Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am so glad Grant is staying with Tania and he's making sure Jeff is taking care of Monica, of sorts. I like those two together too. Grant is working through a lot of issues and we'll have to see what, if any, Tania can get through.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I am so glad Grant is staying with Tania and he's making sure Jeff is taking care of Monica, of sorts. I like those two together too. Grant is working through a lot of issues and we'll have to see what, if any, Tania can get through.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Tania and Grant both have a lot to deal with, but together, who knows what's possible!! Lol. Thank you, Barbara, for this lovely six star review. I do so appreciat you, being a teacher makes it even more amazing. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from blondie560
Lovely chapter Sandra. I was having kind of a crummy day and had a moment to myself. It was uplifting to see Tania now awake. Grant and Monica by her side. I think Tania is too strong to push away what happened to her. She's too passionate about her work and isn't going to give in to Colin. She'll make sure he's put away for a long time. Do you like how I tell you to write your story? LOL. I think there is going to be conflict with Colin's mother doing whatever is necessary to keep him out of jail and she'll be just another hurdle in Tania's life. Again my idea for your story twist. I'll stop and wait till next week to read more. I have to tell you that I will think about your story during the week and think of interesting plots and twists your story could take. Have a good week. I hope you are feeling much better too. Keep smiling! Sally
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Lovely chapter Sandra. I was having kind of a crummy day and had a moment to myself. It was uplifting to see Tania now awake. Grant and Monica by her side. I think Tania is too strong to push away what happened to her. She's too passionate about her work and isn't going to give in to Colin. She'll make sure he's put away for a long time. Do you like how I tell you to write your story? LOL. I think there is going to be conflict with Colin's mother doing whatever is necessary to keep him out of jail and she'll be just another hurdle in Tania's life. Again my idea for your story twist. I'll stop and wait till next week to read more. I have to tell you that I will think about your story during the week and think of interesting plots and twists your story could take. Have a good week. I hope you are feeling much better too. Keep smiling! Sally
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I always look forward to what you are going to say, Sally, and you never disappoint me. Of course, you know I pick up on your suggestions, don't you? Lol! Thank you so much, my friend, you are always saying the right things to put a smile on this old girls face. I honestly do love your reviews. The six beautiful stars come second, but I enjoy seeing them too!! Lol. Thanks so much, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I picked up this chapter and was immediately engulfed in the entire drama of the entire story. A wonderful novel you have written and in process. I found it a thoroughly enjoyable read. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I picked up this chapter and was immediately engulfed in the entire drama of the entire story. A wonderful novel you have written and in process. I found it a thoroughly enjoyable read. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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What an amazing review, thank you so very much, Lance. The six shiny stars are topped by your wonderful, encouraging comments. Thank you! You have made my day. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
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I only speak the truth. People either love or hate my reviews. LOL. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Pantygynt
You have handle the trauma of Tania very well with a lot of show and very little tell. You could have introduced a nurse or doctor into the scene in addition to get the professional angle.
The only rap over the knuckle is this: '...at the hospital's, rather nice, cafeteria,' - pleasant, well-stocked, noisy whatever, anything but 'nice' please. Lol.
I see all the front runners are out there posting today.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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You have handle the trauma of Tania very well with a lot of show and very little tell. You could have introduced a nurse or doctor into the scene in addition to get the professional angle.
The only rap over the knuckle is this: '...at the hospital's, rather nice, cafeteria,' - pleasant, well-stocked, noisy whatever, anything but 'nice' please. Lol.
I see all the front runners are out there posting today.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Jim. I'll go and change that. Yes, and quite honestly, I've got past that now. I just want to finish this book and slip away. I'm enjoying the reviews I'm getting though, and with ones like yours, I know I can make it better. Thanks for that. :)) Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
I've a few poetry books started for my grandchildren. One is called, Scout and her Magical Unicorn. Scout is my youngest granddaugher and is already a superb horse 'lady' at six years old. :))
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How are the shingles doing?
Comment from Ben Colder
You're in hospital.
Wow, that wombat put a hurting on her big time. So glad Grant is there and sees through all of this.
Right on with the mother bit.
That dud needs to be put away before he kills someone.
What a story.
You did well again, Sandy.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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You're in hospital.
Wow, that wombat put a hurting on her big time. So glad Grant is there and sees through all of this.
Right on with the mother bit.
That dud needs to be put away before he kills someone.
What a story.
You did well again, Sandy.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Aw, Bless you, Chuck! What a lovely review, I can tell by your words how much you are into my characters. Thank you for those six stars, my friend, I really appreciated both. Sending you a warm hug. Have a lovely week! :)) Sandy. xxx
Comment from country ranch writer
So glad Tania will be okay after what Collin did to her. Someone needs to teach him a lesson and his mother too. She thinks Grant should do her bidding to take care of her and Collin but she has another thought coming!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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So glad Tania will be okay after what Collin did to her. Someone needs to teach him a lesson and his mother too. She thinks Grant should do her bidding to take care of her and Collin but she has another thought coming!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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She has hurt Grant too much to even expect anything from him. Thank you so much for your lovely review and those wonderful six stars. You've made my dull day shine! Have a lovely week, my friend. :)) Sandra
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Comment from Mistydawn
I'm so glad that she's going to be alright and that Grant and Monica are by her side. It sounds like Grant has feelings for her. It'll be interesting to see if she feels the same. Your story is well-written, very interesting, realistic from start to finish. Like always, I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I'm so glad that she's going to be alright and that Grant and Monica are by her side. It sounds like Grant has feelings for her. It'll be interesting to see if she feels the same. Your story is well-written, very interesting, realistic from start to finish. Like always, I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Yes, Grant is seeing now that not all women are like his mother. You'll learn more about his ex-wife later. Thank you for another lovely review, Misty, I really appreciate it. Warm hugs. Sandra xx