Good Deed Gone Bad
Things don't always go as planned.46 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lol, next time it might be a good idea to ask if she needed help to cross the road!! Lol. Never mind, the thought was there and that's what counts. I hope you took her back across the road! Well done, good luck in the contest. :) Sandra x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Lol, next time it might be a good idea to ask if she needed help to cross the road!! Lol. Never mind, the thought was there and that's what counts. I hope you took her back across the road! Well done, good luck in the contest. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Though your story didn't have a big plot or whopping punch line (we've all seen a version of this with boy scouts, right) it was well-written and engaging. Thanks and good luck~
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Though your story didn't have a big plot or whopping punch line (we've all seen a version of this with boy scouts, right) it was well-written and engaging. Thanks and good luck~
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Begin Again
Oh yeah. When the mind set sees the events one way and the person involves sees it totally opposite. A good deed gone wrong! Nice story and good luck with the contest! It's a good one! Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Oh yeah. When the mind set sees the events one way and the person involves sees it totally opposite. A good deed gone wrong! Nice story and good luck with the contest! It's a good one! Smiles to you!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about the desire to do good doesn't always work out added planned. We may think someone needs help but if we don't ask we may make a mistake and make things worse.
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A very well-written story about the desire to do good doesn't always work out added planned. We may think someone needs help but if we don't ask we may make a mistake and make things worse.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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Comment from padumachitta
hello
ah, the old 'oops'...well I guess the prompt called for this. I think in some cities the woman would have started to scream then some bystander would have taken you hard to the ground...I like your version better.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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hello
ah, the old 'oops'...well I guess the prompt called for this. I think in some cities the woman would have started to scream then some bystander would have taken you hard to the ground...I like your version better.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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Comment from Eddy Fidelis
I have read the story twice, and can read a thousand more times without being fed up. You did a great job there. Perfectly and succinctly written. It is my best. Wish you best of luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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I have read the story twice, and can read a thousand more times without being fed up. You did a great job there. Perfectly and succinctly written. It is my best. Wish you best of luck.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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I?m glad you like it so much. The contest voting booth is open now. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yip nice try to do a good deed when you misread the situation: 'The cross walk light turns green but she doesn't move. She seems afraid, as if she might get caught up in the crowd and then midway across the street drop her belongings. It's time to come to her rescue." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Yip nice try to do a good deed when you misread the situation: 'The cross walk light turns green but she doesn't move. She seems afraid, as if she might get caught up in the crowd and then midway across the street drop her belongings. It's time to come to her rescue." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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I?m glad you liked it. The contest voting booth is open now. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Alli Johnston
I loved this, lol. This was humorous and I could tell it would be from the beginning. You excellently set up the story and the punch line and ended it immediately after a good laugh. Great job
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I loved this, lol. This was humorous and I could tell it would be from the beginning. You excellently set up the story and the punch line and ended it immediately after a good laugh. Great job
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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I?m glad you like it so much. The contest voting booth is open now. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile, in our attempts to help we sometimes do the wrong thing, you injected some humour into your helpful words here, you won my vote, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile, in our attempts to help we sometimes do the wrong thing, you injected some humour into your helpful words here, you won my vote, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
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I?m glad you like it so much. The contest voting booth is open now. Thank you for your review.
Comment from equestrik
This is a good presentation for the contest. Nice picture to reinforce your writing theme. You have portrayed the idea required for the contest. Best to you.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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This is a good presentation for the contest. Nice picture to reinforce your writing theme. You have portrayed the idea required for the contest. Best to you.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
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