Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Sandra,

My stars! I certainly was not expecting this jerk to go that far. But I suppose the lure of money and the excitement of evil can often drive folks to do horrid things.

I am just not sure how he ever thought he could escape a plan like this without involving murder. Yikes!

Intrigued!!

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

That is the problem, you can't do something like Colin is doing without it planning his get out! Hmm. :))
Thank you so very much my dear friend, for this lovely review. I really appreciate it, and you! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

WOW! What a chapter, Sandra. That Colin has been up to no good forever. His plan seems to have worked. However, Monica may throw a wrench in it. She won't let Tania be for gotten. Your words are descriptive, well-chosen, and full of imagery. I could see everything you mentioned. The suspense was intense.
Thanks for sharing. Jan

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

What a lovely, encouraging review, Jan! Thank you so very much, the six stars are the icing in top, and I really appreciate them both. Thank you!! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Is Bill and Cathy okay? It's been such a long time, what with the virus and other things going on at the moment I do tend to worry. I'm glad you're still on here, I'd be worried sick if your weren't! xxxx

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I do hope her friend finds her in time. Maybe the police will help since she found the scuffed shoe, the missing laptop. I sure hope so. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting, believable, start to finish. Your characters come to life. LIke always, I look forward to reading more.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Aw, thank you so much for this lovely review, Misty, and for all those shiny stars. You always say the nicest things. That you think my characters come to life, is no encouraging. I can't thank you enough. Sending you a special warm hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

The gall of this no-good slipping her a mickey.Poor girl so helpless but maybe the table will turn in her favor or it seems help maybe on the way. Good one Sandy. The nerve of this guy. Monica will save the day.
Well I suppose we will see.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

I know!! What an evil man! :)) Thank you so much, dear Chuck, for this lovely review, and the lovely 6 stars. Monica will fight tooth and nail to try and find her friend. Let's hope she finds her. Sending you lots of love and a warm hug, my dear friend. :)) Sandy. xx

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

Omigosh! I hadn't thought about him drugging her. Now, she's truly in danger. Hopefully, she won't give up her passwords. As long as she doesn't, he'll have to keep her alive. Cliffhanger. Hurry with the next chapter.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

I know, I was surprised, too! He did that when I wasn't looking! Lol. Thank you so much for those lovely six stars, and fabulous review. Tania is a stubborn lady but she's never been in a position like this before. I'm keeping my fingers crossed she doesn't tell! :)) Thanks my dear friend, come, sister across the pond! Sending you a special warm hug and love. Sandra xxx

reply by damommy on 29-Nov-2020

Sending hugs and love back to you, dear lady.

Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

Wow! I didn't see that coming. I thought he would try to charm her but he is more evil that I thought. He has the plans but they are copyrighted in her name. Her friend at least knows that she had been taken against her will. You have a very exciting story going. I'm anxious to read more.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Yes, Colin is a nasty, vicious man. Now Tania is in trouble. The next part is nearly ready. :) Thank you so very much for this amazing review, Beth, you really gave me a big smile. Your award of the six stars are so gratefully received, my friend. Thank you! Warm hugs. Sandra xxx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Oh, Sandra, this is indeed exciting stuff. And you have left us on a cliff hanger. That Colin is a nasty piece of work, and I'm so worried about Tania. It appears that he's now got hold of her drawings. But what is he going to do her? At least, Monica now knows something is seriously wrong.
He stood up and looked back along the way he'd came, = he'd come
That's Monica's! = Don't you mean: That's Tania's!?
Well written, my friend. Ulla xxxx

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank goodness you noticed that wrong name, Ulla, you were the only one that spotted it. Yes, it was Tania's shoe, and is now I've corrected it. Lol. I read that so many times and never once saw it!
Thank you so much for this fabulous review, and all the stars. Colin is nasty, and he doesn't improve. Sending you a humongous hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Exceptional

This is a mesmerizing story that had me hooked from the first sentence to the last. Colin is one bad character. Him drugging Tania caught me by surprise. You left us all with a cliff hanger. Well done!

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank you so very much for this lovely review and all those shiny stars, Rebecca. I'm so very pleased you liked this part, it took me ages to get how I wanted it. Your review is so encouraging, thank you! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Please Monica get help before it's too late. Maybe Grant or even the police would be better. I can't wait to read the next post. You have me on the edge of my seat. I am really liking this.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for those lovely stars, Barbara, and the wonderful review. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading this part. The next part has Monica really worried. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

So where to now, Tania's good friend and foster sister, Monica, has discovered that Tania has been missing, as is her laptop, she goes to the restaurant discovering she left there sometime ago, but discovers her missing red shoe, scuffed and unevenly worn, what will she do now? Well done, Sandra, excellent episode, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank you so much, Roy. It took me ages to write this part so I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Warm hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 29-Nov-2020

Well done, great story Sandra,