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Comment from Ben Colder
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Once said that in every life a little rain must fall but in Christ a rainbow appears. A promise for an eternal life of joy, peace, happiness beyond the human mind could ever know.
Your encouragement toward this moment for this person is priceless.
Love is spoken in various ways.
My blessings to you.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, dear Chuck. I do hope all our prayers bring Yvonne comfort. Warm hugs. Sandy. xx
Comment from Shirley McLain
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What a beautiful poem. It was written to be comforting and I believe it is so. You did a great job and I didn't find any errors. Have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Shirley. I'm so pleased you think my poem will help Yvonne. To lose your son must be devastating. So I do hope all our prayers will help. Thank you for the extra story, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
    I haven't seen you for a while. Have you been ill? I'm glad to see you back. xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Lovely image, Sandra.
-You have written a beautiful
prayer for Yvonne; it will
offer a lot of comfort for her.
-You take it to places maybe
some of us hadn't thought of-
"'Why him, not me?' He's heard
those questions, too."
-I think Yvonne probably can use
someone saying that.
-I also l like your line about
gifting "sweet memories."
-An excellent closing couplet, too.
-Thanks for sharing these words
from your heart, my friend.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    It broke my heart to read of Yvonne's loss. I do hope this poem does help her a little. Thank you for your kind words on my small part in this prayer book for her. Thank you for the six stars, as well, my friend. Sandra xxxx
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Sep-2020
    You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I am glad I had them to use. It was a beautiful poem, and I think it will offer her a lot of comfort.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I must say you did a wonderful job with this poem with so few words.
You captured my attention from the star, the photo is so beautiful
Thank you for sharing
stay safe and be blessed
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Cookie. I'm glad you liked this one. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Mistydawn
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Your beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes. It's so warm, heartfelt, emotional, so truthful. Her memories and her faith will see her through. . I'd like to believe that the deceased comes back and visits now and then.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Misty. I do believe they watch over us, I could feel my late husband for years. Until he knew ours sons and I was okay. Thank you for that extra star, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from lyenochka
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Sandra, this is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing this lovely and consoling, prayer-filled sonnet for Yvonne. Those memories will comfort her and our prayers will continue to be lifted up to support her.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Helen, I do hope it brings her some comfort. Having two sons myself, I just can't begin to imagine how hard this must be for her. Take care, my freind. Sandra xx
Comment from Cindy Decker
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Sandra, I do not know what happened in Yvonne's family', but your poem is a beautiful tribute to a loss. Grief is such a difficult thing to deal with, I pray she gets through it. Beautiful sentiment.
Blessings.
Cindy

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Cindy. Yvonne has just lost her precious son, I can't begin to know how much pain she is in. I'm hoping all our prayers and poems will help once she is able to read them, perhaps in a while when the pain isn't so raw. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
reply by Cindy Decker on 25-Sep-2020
    I?m so sorry for her, Sandra.
    Thank you for letting me know.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    I know. It's so sad. xx
Comment from Gert sherwood
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sandramitchell
Your prayer for Yvonne
for chapter in the book Prayers for Fanstory Family
abab -aa I feel the sincere and caring words for Our lord to hear.
Gert

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Gert. Such a sad time for dear Yvonne. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A beautiful reassurance, Sandra, combined with loving testimony of heart of prayer... the perfect hand of friendship at an indescribably time... Yvette

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Yvette. I feel so upset for her. Losing a child is the hardest loss of all. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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In the couplet, Sandra should you have said, "One day {you'll} be together once again?" This is a lovely poem
for Yvonne. Her pain will ease with time, but it does take time. Well done, Dear. Nancy:)))

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Nancy. I made that correction. I'm so used to saying we'll all meet again, but 'You'll be together' in this instance was right. I'm glad you pointed it out. Warm hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xx