Comment from
Marjon van Bruggen
Very nice acrostic poem, this summer nights! I recognize the sounds all, and hear them every night in my garden. I think you get a better acrostic when you center the poem. It will then appear under the illustration. Now the lines are interrupted, because they are placed next to the picture.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
Thank you for the tip! I will look at it! Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it!
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
Thank you for the tip! I will look at it! Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
Thank you for the tip! I will look at it! Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it!
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 31-Aug-2020
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 31-Aug-2020