Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Enfolding Eternity"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Yvette.
-A good follow up to
Gypsy's poem.
-Good syllable count
and effective imagery.
-A positive message about
opening our hearts to
find "nature's rhythm."
-Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Yvette.
-A good follow up to
Gypsy's poem.
-Good syllable count
and effective imagery.
-A positive message about
opening our hearts to
find "nature's rhythm."
-Well done.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Pam, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette, and thanks for sharing.
Comment from June Sargent
A perfect couplet to follow Gypsy's chapter! We need to be reminded of nature's beauty and resilience in this time of pandemics, politics and protests. Life will go on...well said. Love the artwork!
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A perfect couplet to follow Gypsy's chapter! We need to be reminded of nature's beauty and resilience in this time of pandemics, politics and protests. Life will go on...well said. Love the artwork!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Well, June, you just gave me a much needed smile with those BRIGHT stars, my lady -- THANK YOU so much!! ;) :) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
You have added another wonderful chapter to this collaborative work. All the elements of your post - illustration, verse, and notes - make for a great overall presentation for FS reviewers.
I am on the tip of adding to the same, but for some reason I am holding back (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Yvette,
You have added another wonderful chapter to this collaborative work. All the elements of your post - illustration, verse, and notes - make for a great overall presentation for FS reviewers.
I am on the tip of adding to the same, but for some reason I am holding back (-;
Mark
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Be brave - step out and let that pen go!! ;) :) Thanx so much, Mark, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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will you be teaching online again? if so, will attendance go up during the virtual classroom situations because of the virus?
stay safe
keep healthy
hopefully your house will sell soon at the price you want
Comment from poetwatch
Ah, the romantic side of your soul is showing the spirit the love that resides in your heart, Yvette. :) I read your notes and I will check into it. I'm not much of a team player, always been a recluse, but with this stay home deals... I'm going nuts and will try anything. :) Good couplet.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Ah, the romantic side of your soul is showing the spirit the love that resides in your heart, Yvette. :) I read your notes and I will check into it. I'm not much of a team player, always been a recluse, but with this stay home deals... I'm going nuts and will try anything. :) Good couplet.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Yeah, pretty sure the romance is all in my head...lol!! ;) Thanx so much, Jose, for stopping by on this shorty, sir -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Loved it! And your sentiment perfectly follows Gypsy's 575 poem. May we keep opening our hearts with love so that we can enjoying the peace that God preprogrammed us to enjoy.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Loved it! And your sentiment perfectly follows Gypsy's 575 poem. May we keep opening our hearts with love so that we can enjoying the peace that God preprogrammed us to enjoy.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Helen, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This piece of art is so vivid and powerful, that the couplet is almost redundant! Look at the shape of the heart, the light, the human entering the heart, the veins taking over her body as she enters in, the colors. Don't know what else to say...
Amazing! As always, Yvette. The whole thing is a completed work of art.
xxLucy
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This piece of art is so vivid and powerful, that the couplet is almost redundant! Look at the shape of the heart, the light, the human entering the heart, the veins taking over her body as she enters in, the colors. Don't know what else to say...
Amazing! As always, Yvette. The whole thing is a completed work of art.
xxLucy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Lucy, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Those with a heart closed up--enveloped in fear, anger, jealousy, low self-esteem--never learn to appreciate life, other people, . . . Love opens us up to the joys, the "rhythm," of life.
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Those with a heart closed up--enveloped in fear, anger, jealousy, low self-esteem--never learn to appreciate life, other people, . . . Love opens us up to the joys, the "rhythm," of life.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Janice, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette, this is a nice 7/7. The photo is very beautiful and the words are awesome. I wanted to be part of Tenga, but I haven't mastered the Haiku form. I have to catch a 7/7 maybe.
Excellent work.
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Yvette, this is a nice 7/7. The photo is very beautiful and the words are awesome. I wanted to be part of Tenga, but I haven't mastered the Haiku form. I have to catch a 7/7 maybe.
Excellent work.
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Cindy, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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You?re welcome😊
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Wow that's saying a lot. The fantastic picture gives the essence of nature's rhythm and the words words explain how the heart needs to be open to love. Great statememt.
Ralf
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Wow that's saying a lot. The fantastic picture gives the essence of nature's rhythm and the words words explain how the heart needs to be open to love. Great statememt.
Ralf
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Ralf, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, a loving heart opened wide will feel nature's rhythm if they are sensitive to this revelation. Nature's rhythm is all around us, but most people don't even realize it.
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Yes, a loving heart opened wide will feel nature's rhythm if they are sensitive to this revelation. Nature's rhythm is all around us, but most people don't even realize it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanx so much, Rebecca, for stopping by on this shorty, my lady -- great to hear from you! ;) Things actually get back to a regular routine for me this week (until the house sells... lol!). Take care of you and I'll be checkin' in more often! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome. I hope you get some rest.