Soulful at Birth
The breath of life embraced by the soul32 total reviews
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This waas well done. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. I truly do like and appreciate this poem. You have a good way of talking abut a soul. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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This waas well done. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. I truly do like and appreciate this poem. You have a good way of talking abut a soul. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Amanda, your kind wordsd are very welcomed, thank you!
Comment from ameen786
Beautiful reflections upon soul's birth in meaningful verses; along with soul we are the only creation given the power of reasoning and man uses this reasoning to either corrupt the soul or purify; good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Beautiful reflections upon soul's birth in meaningful verses; along with soul we are the only creation given the power of reasoning and man uses this reasoning to either corrupt the soul or purify; good luck!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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ameen, thank you you have it down pat!
Comment from Megan3333
A very beautiful poem talking about birth. All the words you use are amazing and I love all the rhymes. You are really good at using descriptive words. This poem is very good so keep writing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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A very beautiful poem talking about birth. All the words you use are amazing and I love all the rhymes. You are really good at using descriptive words. This poem is very good so keep writing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Megan, thank you for the kind review and comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the birth of a soul that is pure and white with no stains, the best time for a soul on earth. After a few years sometimes the soul big hurt if misused and it has to be cleansed by the blood of the lamb once again.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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A very well-written poem about the birth of a soul that is pure and white with no stains, the best time for a soul on earth. After a few years sometimes the soul big hurt if misused and it has to be cleansed by the blood of the lamb once again.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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SAndra, that would be a womnderful poem about Grace....
Comment from jaded831
Your poem made me think of something I like to say, "we all die, but what matters most, is what we do while alive." Although no one intends to die, if we can change life for the better. That life had meaning.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Your poem made me think of something I like to say, "we all die, but what matters most, is what we do while alive." Although no one intends to die, if we can change life for the better. That life had meaning.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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jaded, you my friend do reflect in these written words a person with a soul your lkife has meaning and you added pleasure to mine with your comments!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I love the profound depth of your writing. The Divinity endowed at birth is such a beautiful and valid thought. With this picture which is a hint of Mother Theresa, your portrayal is superlative.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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I love the profound depth of your writing. The Divinity endowed at birth is such a beautiful and valid thought. With this picture which is a hint of Mother Theresa, your portrayal is superlative.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Ralf, I delight in your connection with the tight graphic and the message intended.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed and vividly descriptive. I think we had a soul while still in the womb. Anyway, your poem is thought-provoking and lovely.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed and vividly descriptive. I think we had a soul while still in the womb. Anyway, your poem is thought-provoking and lovely.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Janice it is probably true that the soul aspect is perking in the womb and perhaos that first breath allows the cry of JOY.
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Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the contest.
A few small suggestions for clarity:
Beginning with that very first
whisper of a breath Divinely given[,]
each and every being upon arrival
into this plane we call earth
is born with a uniquely assigned burst
of selfhood mixed with a cosmic vision [of]
compassion and a passion built for survival[--]
a being filled with so much love, so much mirth!
To have such a life, given this substance, a thirst[,]
means that this person has a depth deeply driven
making every new day a welcomed revival
because a soul was embedded in this being at birth!
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the contest.
A few small suggestions for clarity:
Beginning with that very first
whisper of a breath Divinely given[,]
each and every being upon arrival
into this plane we call earth
is born with a uniquely assigned burst
of selfhood mixed with a cosmic vision [of]
compassion and a passion built for survival[--]
a being filled with so much love, so much mirth!
To have such a life, given this substance, a thirst[,]
means that this person has a depth deeply driven
making every new day a welcomed revival
because a soul was embedded in this being at birth!
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Robert I will undertake a review of your notes and thank you for your thoughts.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The soul as an essence of our humanity and a companion in life's journey. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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The soul as an essence of our humanity and a companion in life's journey. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Iza, thank you!
Comment from emem224224
Your words and phrases, complemented by the picture you have chosen, have combined to be a perfect description of a soul. Impossible to hold, incredible to glimpse as a child is born, a soul is the ultimate gift from God that should be treasured throughout life. I loved reading this.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Your words and phrases, complemented by the picture you have chosen, have combined to be a perfect description of a soul. Impossible to hold, incredible to glimpse as a child is born, a soul is the ultimate gift from God that should be treasured throughout life. I loved reading this.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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emem, thank you for such a kind review and positive comments,
