The Potato Wagon
A new purpose for an old friend.30 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice photo and
presentation, Rhonda.
-Those potatoes look really good!
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-A well written poem that takes
us on the journey of this wagon
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you begin with the
beginnings of its life with your
boys using their imaginations as they played.
-I like this image:
"Bright fiery mane, fierce spirit unbound."
-Very good concluding lines as Old Red
now has a new purpose in life.
-Well done, my friend.
-I look forward to more of the
fruits of your labors of love.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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-Very nice photo and
presentation, Rhonda.
-Those potatoes look really good!
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-A well written poem that takes
us on the journey of this wagon
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you begin with the
beginnings of its life with your
boys using their imaginations as they played.
-I like this image:
"Bright fiery mane, fierce spirit unbound."
-Very good concluding lines as Old Red
now has a new purpose in life.
-Well done, my friend.
-I look forward to more of the
fruits of your labors of love.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Pam, thank you so much for the brilliant rating. It is accepted in the spirit given.
I so greatly appreciate the individual comments on the lines. That is so helpful. I need to get back to doing that as well.
I do, as stated in the author?s notes, and by your encouragement, intend on posting more.
Enjoy your week,
Rhonda
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You are very welcome and deserving of the rating and the comments, Rhonda. I am glad you will be posting more, and more than that, I am happy that your gardening is bringing you so much joy.
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I?m hoping this will lead back to rejumping my novel writing. I know the desire still lurks inside.
Thanks for years of support,
Rhonda
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Maybe give it some time before jumping in, and you will know when it feels right to do so. You are very welcome for the support.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow this one brought back a flood of memories and what even I used to do with the meager toys I had to play with. Excellent play on rhyming words and a nice one to start my day
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Wow this one brought back a flood of memories and what even I used to do with the meager toys I had to play with. Excellent play on rhyming words and a nice one to start my day
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you, Barb. I had a little red wagon when I was growing up as well. I think it?s an essential part of childhood.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Shirley McLain
A wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading. I remember my Radio Flyer wagon. I so no mistakes. You did a great job. Take care and enjoy your Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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A wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading. I remember my Radio Flyer wagon. I so no mistakes. You did a great job. Take care and enjoy your Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for taking time to review. Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such an uplifting write filled with the spirit of growing things and your wonderful picture filled with your crop of potatoes is proof of your success. It must be so satisfying to eat home grown food and your poem pays a tribute to all your efforts, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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This is such an uplifting write filled with the spirit of growing things and your wonderful picture filled with your crop of potatoes is proof of your success. It must be so satisfying to eat home grown food and your poem pays a tribute to all your efforts, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for your sweet review, Dolly. Yes, it is satisfying to eat what you grow, and it gets me out of the house in a safe way.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, re-purposing is a noble act at any time, but in these disposable days, it's even more noteworthy. I like that you've given the red wagon character and poignancy. A happy ending to a tale that often ends in the landfill.
Well done.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Ah, re-purposing is a noble act at any time, but in these disposable days, it's even more noteworthy. I like that you've given the red wagon character and poignancy. A happy ending to a tale that often ends in the landfill.
Well done.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments, Lee. I don?t know how this wagon managed to survive time and my children, but it did and it sure comes in handy.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from royowen
What a lovely poem Rhonda, and you've taken what some might deem menial, you have made this noble occupation a right royal pursuit, and an honourable desire unparalleled, beautifully written in fine rhyming couplets, well done Rhonda, thank you for your exceptional support, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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What a lovely poem Rhonda, and you've taken what some might deem menial, you have made this noble occupation a right royal pursuit, and an honourable desire unparalleled, beautifully written in fine rhyming couplets, well done Rhonda, thank you for your exceptional support, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for the six star rating. I love it?s sincerity and specificity. Coming from such a gifted poet, I take your comments to heart.
Take care and keep blessing us with your poems. I often share them with my husband, who often gets tears eyed.
Rhonda
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My privilege Rhonda
Comment from lancellot
Your poem reminds me of an old house. If these wall could talk; the memories they could share of a families growth, but then the day of sale and abandonment comes. Like your wagon, if it were a person, it would long to be of use again, to be a part of life. A moving piece.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Your poem reminds me of an old house. If these wall could talk; the memories they could share of a families growth, but then the day of sale and abandonment comes. Like your wagon, if it were a person, it would long to be of use again, to be a part of life. A moving piece.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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What a grand review, my friend. I appreciate the time and care you took to leave it.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Lulube
Love this real transformation from fun to work. I too have a red wagon, it's been 18 years and I just bent one of the front tires past the point of no return. Do you have an extra? lol great story for your red wagon.
lulube
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Love this real transformation from fun to work. I too have a red wagon, it's been 18 years and I just bent one of the front tires past the point of no return. Do you have an extra? lol great story for your red wagon.
lulube
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for your review, my friend. My advice about your wagon is to turn it into a planter and set it out in your yard as art.
Take care,
Rhonda
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lol I can put it beside the push mower I have in the middle of my front yard English garden. no lawn
lulube
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Nice!!
Comment from lyenochka
Good to see you back again, Rhonda. I'm glad you are enjoying gardening and are able to share a poem in rhyming couplets about the re-purposing of a faithful old Radio Flyer red wagon.
"So much depends
on a red" wagon
full of potatoes
beside the gardener â?º Apologies to William Carlos Williams.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Good to see you back again, Rhonda. I'm glad you are enjoying gardening and are able to share a poem in rhyming couplets about the re-purposing of a faithful old Radio Flyer red wagon.
"So much depends
on a red" wagon
full of potatoes
beside the gardener â?º Apologies to William Carlos Williams.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for your review. Yes, much depends on a wagon. We have several, all larger than the one in the photograph, but this one is more agile. Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Diana Kane
Fabulous! I love how this piece illustrates the imagination of a child and then how this wagon is re-purpose later to be used again to fulfill a totally different goal. This is beautiful. Thank you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Fabulous! I love how this piece illustrates the imagination of a child and then how this wagon is re-purpose later to be used again to fulfill a totally different goal. This is beautiful. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Wow, Diana, thank you for the 6 stars. What a wonderful way to start out. You're the best, and I'm glad you liked the poem.
