Evening Stroll
The wonders of discovery on a evening walk47 total reviews
Comment from crzypnter
Hi,
You did a wonderful job writing this poem to fit it the restraints. Often we're not as observant as we think we are, until something different catches our eye. Thank you for sharing. God bless
August
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Hi,
You did a wonderful job writing this poem to fit it the restraints. Often we're not as observant as we think we are, until something different catches our eye. Thank you for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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August, thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written trimeric poem about the discovery we can make on our evening walk. When we walk the same route every day, we think we have seen it all, but sometimes we are surprised with something never noticed before.
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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A very well-written trimeric poem about the discovery we can make on our evening walk. When we walk the same route every day, we think we have seen it all, but sometimes we are surprised with something never noticed before.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Sandra, thank you!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR ,
In the light of Author Note, it's a nice piece of Romance Poetry meeting the desired norms, having smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Please see the 1st word of the 1st Stanza: "the" Is it okay?
Just out of curiosity, if you don't mind.
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Hello JLR ,
In the light of Author Note, it's a nice piece of Romance Poetry meeting the desired norms, having smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Please see the 1st word of the 1st Stanza: "the" Is it okay?
Just out of curiosity, if you don't mind.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Good eyeballs, thank you!
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from tfawcus
Very nicely done. The art of this form is having lines that fit together seamlessly in the first stanza, but can then be amplified successfully in each of the following three. You have achieved this well and produced a poem of great beauty into the bargain. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Very nicely done. The art of this form is having lines that fit together seamlessly in the first stanza, but can then be amplified successfully in each of the following three. You have achieved this well and produced a poem of great beauty into the bargain. Congratulations!
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Thank you very much, kind sir!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Evening walks can be full of discoveries as are well pointed out in this wonderful poem. I could see the images in my mind's eye. Well written!
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Evening walks can be full of discoveries as are well pointed out in this wonderful poem. I could see the images in my mind's eye. Well written!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Smiling back!
Comment from StrengthInNumbers
Hello!
This is quite an interesting poem! I have never seen this format before. I like it! It looks challenging for sure. Its almost like an Essay, where the opening paragraph outlines what you're going to talk about, and each subsequent paragraph expands on each of the topics mentioned in the introduction.
I wonder what was your inspiration for this poem?
Well done!
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Hello!
This is quite an interesting poem! I have never seen this format before. I like it! It looks challenging for sure. Its almost like an Essay, where the opening paragraph outlines what you're going to talk about, and each subsequent paragraph expands on each of the topics mentioned in the introduction.
I wonder what was your inspiration for this poem?
Well done!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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I am honored by your six star review. My words come to me onto paper via journaling. So image, some visual snapshot, a nature scene.. all are reflective thoughts put to paper then massaged.
Comment from lyenochka
You did great with this new form and I liked that you didn't try to rhyme because it made the lines more naturally between stanzas.
One thing I noticed is all your stanzas begin with a capitalized word except the first one. Is there a reason?
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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You did great with this new form and I liked that you didn't try to rhyme because it made the lines more naturally between stanzas.
One thing I noticed is all your stanzas begin with a capitalized word except the first one. Is there a reason?
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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My dear friend, thank you, I loved writing this...it just felt good!
Comment from ameen786
When you are constrained with certain poetic styles/forms; it becomes a challenge to maintain the theme/substance of the poem; you did great! Enjoyed the imagery; thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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When you are constrained with certain poetic styles/forms; it becomes a challenge to maintain the theme/substance of the poem; you did great! Enjoyed the imagery; thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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amenn, I am honored and humbled by your strong validation, thank you!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading this poem. It is interesting, unique, and original. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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I have enjoyed reading this poem. It is interesting, unique, and original. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Smiling back! Thank you..
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You're welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
This was a great trimeric! It was lyrical and whimsical. A very enjoyable walk in an enchanted forest. Great artwork to highlight your words. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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This was a great trimeric! It was lyrical and whimsical. A very enjoyable walk in an enchanted forest. Great artwork to highlight your words. Well done!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Smiling back! Thank you..