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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Artistic Creations Kept Hidden"
An artful mix of poetic forms.

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Comment from zanya
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An interesting sentiment - who knows how many of these there may very well be hidden in attics somewhere? such great ones and their unheard of works celebrated by Thomas Gray in his wonderful Elegy written in a country churchyard and remembered as 'Mute inglorious Milton'

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you greatly for reading and reviewing my posting. Your comments are truly appreciated. :-)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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You are absolutely right that many art works and writings "would touch others deeply on emotional or intellectual levels...or both."

Do sit down and try to re-write the play piece that was lost. I once lost one on a computer crash, finally re-wrote it, and it turned out better the second time around.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you for reading and sharing your own experience. I'm glad to know it turned out positive, and I appreciate your comments very much.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 12-May-2020
    Any time.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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What a bummer that your written one-act play was lost. Had you moved or did they lose it? I can imagine that it was recommended because your work is greatly received.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    It was when it was mistakenly put into a wrong pile and discarded. It was the only copy. I've learned my lesson and have duplicates of all my current projects. (I consider that play the 'one that got away'.) Sad but that's what happened. Thank you so much for this much appreciated review and comments, Rosy. xo
Comment from R. Hiland
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"Great works never seen" is a fine place to start. Love the sense of loss in the "withered vine". "Dead masterpieces"? Not so much. I would have preferred "lost masterpieces;" to leave a glimmer of hope.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    I truly appreciate your comment and have given it a lot of thought. I then went back and changed the word to drooped and redid the artwork. Thank you greatly for this very helpful review.
Comment from BlueTiger
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Great work on this piece. I like the idea, and the image of creative works dying like plants. Interesting idea and well executed.
Best of luck on the contest,
-BT

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you greatly, BT. I'm glad to know you like this idea and I appreciate your comments very much. --Janet
Comment from country ranch writer
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What has meaning for some ringing out many emotions. ithink it isin the way the presentation is displayed for others to view.good job.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your thoughts on this posting. I appreciate them so much!
reply by country ranch writer on 13-May-2020
    Smiles
reply by country ranch writer on 13-May-2020
    Smiles