Resplendent rays
A natural event noticed40 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 5-7-5, Resplendent Rays, has the right set up and finds the sun doing its thing and sending life to all living things.
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This nature 5-7-5, Resplendent Rays, has the right set up and finds the sun doing its thing and sending life to all living things.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Bill I am grateful! Thank you
Comment from Bichon
This was the perfect example of a simplistic nature poem! The imagery was vivid and really made me happy whilst reading it. You've covered the contest rules very well and I wish you the best of luck.
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This was the perfect example of a simplistic nature poem! The imagery was vivid and really made me happy whilst reading it. You've covered the contest rules very well and I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Bichon, thank you so very much.
Comment from HansiJ
I think the word " resplended" is the keyword that creates a wonderful picture of sunbathed flowers in our minds. I wish you all the best for the contest.
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I think the word " resplended" is the keyword that creates a wonderful picture of sunbathed flowers in our minds. I wish you all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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HansiJ Thank you very much!
Comment from Cindy Decker
A very beautIdyl haiku poem.
I love the image painted in your poem. The word 'resplendent' is a beautiful pivotal point in the poem.
Excellent work.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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A very beautIdyl haiku poem.
I love the image painted in your poem. The word 'resplendent' is a beautiful pivotal point in the poem.
Excellent work.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Cindy, I am very grateful for your comments.
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You?re very welcome.
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there A very creative and inspiring 5 7 5 Nature poem you wrote. Great message in few words. Very well written and a rich description of words used, great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
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Hi there A very creative and inspiring 5 7 5 Nature poem you wrote. Great message in few words. Very well written and a rich description of words used, great poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
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Lourens, thank you for this validation
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last
line says it all! The poem was uplifting and bright. The artwork
compliments this poem well. Hope you had a great day!
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last
line says it all! The poem was uplifting and bright. The artwork
compliments this poem well. Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Harmmony, thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-We had a sunny day today, too.
-I'm glad you did, as well.
-I like the concluding line,
as the "flowers dance."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-We had a sunny day today, too.
-I'm glad you did, as well.
-I like the concluding line,
as the "flowers dance."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Paam thank you! III hope your week has been full of great joy.
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You are welcome. I appreciate your reply. The same is wished for you.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I like the way each word adds to the overall description and builds up the image. I like the way the last line works alongside the other two, which I always find is quite hard to do, but works very well here.
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I like the way each word adds to the overall description and builds up the image. I like the way the last line works alongside the other two, which I always find is quite hard to do, but works very well here.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you, I value your comments.
Comment from Gail Denham
Oh don't we love that sun - I planted pumpkin seeds a few days ago - and now want to get potato starts and carrots. Just about the only things that grow in our area - cuz it freezes at nights into July sometimes. But the sun cheers - I love to see it. and I thank God for it.
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Oh don't we love that sun - I planted pumpkin seeds a few days ago - and now want to get potato starts and carrots. Just about the only things that grow in our area - cuz it freezes at nights into July sometimes. But the sun cheers - I love to see it. and I thank God for it.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Gail, thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, inspirational poem. Nature IS inspiring, regardless of what transpires in the world. Good use of personification
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, inspirational poem. Nature IS inspiring, regardless of what transpires in the world. Good use of personification
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Janice, thank you.