A Strange Garment!
Acknowledging the Strange Garment we wear in life!76 total reviews
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of poetry. I enjoyed the passion and the expressions of garment. Nice presentation and well structured stanzas. Perfect image. Keep it up! I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Hi, excellent piece of poetry. I enjoyed the passion and the expressions of garment. Nice presentation and well structured stanzas. Perfect image. Keep it up! I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Heavenempress! Meeting you is an honor. Thanks for the "Exceptional review, kind words and taking the time to read my work." A 2nd "SALUTE" for recommending my work to others. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Blessings, I thought this poem was really expressive of your feelings about who we are and how we get to be who we are in life. Your first line "Judge me not by my silver hair, nor the garment I chose to wear" shows that neither our age nor our status in the world matters to God and when he comes for us none of that will make a difference, only if we chose to receive his son, Jesus as our savior.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Blessings, I thought this poem was really expressive of your feelings about who we are and how we get to be who we are in life. Your first line "Judge me not by my silver hair, nor the garment I chose to wear" shows that neither our age nor our status in the world matters to God and when he comes for us none of that will make a difference, only if we chose to receive his son, Jesus as our savior.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," to you and the beautiful lady at your side, Frank! Great hearing from you again. Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a well thought and written poem, full of truth and lessons. The roles we plays are seen, but who we really are underneath is hidden most of the time. What a strange garment indeed.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This is a well thought and written poem, full of truth and lessons. The roles we plays are seen, but who we really are underneath is hidden most of the time. What a strange garment indeed.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Rebecca! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
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I always love your replies! Classy.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Feelings writing prompt.
This heartfelt piece is well matched by the artwork.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Feelings writing prompt.
This heartfelt piece is well matched by the artwork.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Sharon! Great hearing from you again. Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work." All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from kpepper
Such a beautiful poem with a deep meaning that I never thought to look at from your point of view you made. It truly is such a strange garment our whole life is as a whole but one that must be lived and embraced! Thank you for sharing your poem!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Such a beautiful poem with a deep meaning that I never thought to look at from your point of view you made. It truly is such a strange garment our whole life is as a whole but one that must be lived and embraced! Thank you for sharing your poem!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Kpepper! Meeting you is an honor. Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work." Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from sunnilicious
Beautiful poem. Nice visual imageries that are creative and clearly written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good storytelling. Good luck in the contest. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Beautiful poem. Nice visual imageries that are creative and clearly written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good storytelling. Good luck in the contest. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Sunnilicious! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the "Excellent" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from Puzzle
I really felt this piece. It's amazing what people do in their lives just to keep going. It's amazing how others judge without truly knowing the other person. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I really felt this piece. It's amazing what people do in their lives just to keep going. It's amazing how others judge without truly knowing the other person. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Puzzle! Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words and taking the time to review my work." All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from mickyj1
nicely phrased and formatted, you have a beautiful way of crafting your words to speak beauty, hope, faith and the power to dream....thank you for sharing....I too have faith in the Almighty....here is something that might inspire you in math form.....
God is < 0 + God is > (I+1)
(I+1) 4 (1) + (1) 4 (I+1) (I+1) = infinite plus one or "all"
so therefore God is less than nothing
And God is greater than all
God has no equals
All for one
And one for all
Praise be to God....
Amen
Michael.....love in the dark
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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nicely phrased and formatted, you have a beautiful way of crafting your words to speak beauty, hope, faith and the power to dream....thank you for sharing....I too have faith in the Almighty....here is something that might inspire you in math form.....
God is < 0 + God is > (I+1)
(I+1) 4 (1) + (1) 4 (I+1) (I+1) = infinite plus one or "all"
so therefore God is less than nothing
And God is greater than all
God has no equals
All for one
And one for all
Praise be to God....
Amen
Michael.....love in the dark
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Micky! Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words, math lesson and taking the time to read my work. All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Wow what a beautiful expression of feelings. So well written. A joy to read. The flow and rhymes were wonderful. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Wow what a beautiful expression of feelings. So well written. A joy to read. The flow and rhymes were wonderful. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Lance! Thanks for the "Exceptional review, Kind words and taking the time to read my work." Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from Mia Twysted
In this piece, I hear a prayer to be accepted for the way you are. There is no looking back and you are connected to another in the here and now. Before doesn't matter just the now, before it is too late and time has run out.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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In this piece, I hear a prayer to be accepted for the way you are. There is no looking back and you are connected to another in the here and now. Before doesn't matter just the now, before it is too late and time has run out.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Mia! Great hearing from you again. Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words taking the time to read my work." Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.