Comment from JudyE

Excellent

The story continues to be entertaining and flows well.

In the first paragraph of this chapter, the background colour of the last sentence is different for some reason.

I couldn't find anything on a first reading but then wondered if you needed a comma after 'revelation'.
I sensed that she was teetering on the edge of an uncomfortable revelation and in two minds about continuing.

On Sunday, we fly to Nepal for three weeks, mainly to attend a Hindu wedding, which no doubt will be something of a revelation for us. lol I'll review when I can but I might be late sometimes. Anyway, you hardly need me now. :)

Best wishes
Judy

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 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020

Thanks, Judi. Just trying to tie a few loose ends in before the final chapters. I appreciate your review. Good luck in Nepal. Lovely people there. I used to go to Kathmandu now and again during my flying days, taking Ghurka troops back home for the annual harvest from their mercenary duties in Brunei, Singapore and Hong Kong. Fifty years ago now - I expect much has changed. All good wishes, Tony