Saying Goodbye to Phyllis
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Comment from Sugarray77
Well done and well said Robyn. Your heartfelt verse really touched me and I know that dear Phyllis would have appreciated it very much. Good rhyming and excellent composition.
Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Well done and well said Robyn. Your heartfelt verse really touched me and I know that dear Phyllis would have appreciated it very much. Good rhyming and excellent composition.
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you, sweetie.
Comment from Tina Crute
This is most precious! Every trial we have, God had the answer. I like the consistency of that thought in this poem. You mention God's love, His peace, His hands, etc as things He uses to comfort us. This is a great tribute to Phyllis!
Beautifully done:)
Tina
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This is most precious! Every trial we have, God had the answer. I like the consistency of that thought in this poem. You mention God's love, His peace, His hands, etc as things He uses to comfort us. This is a great tribute to Phyllis!
Beautifully done:)
Tina
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome:)
Tina
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
A deep, meaningful and heartfelt tribute to Phyllis! You words were inspiring and the reading experience was proper good! May God bless you and Phyllis as well. May she rest in peace!
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A deep, meaningful and heartfelt tribute to Phyllis! You words were inspiring and the reading experience was proper good! May God bless you and Phyllis as well. May she rest in peace!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Robyn.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very nice tribute poem,
and lovely thoughts using
tears as the theme.
-I think we always have
to hold friends and loved ones
close in order to remember
them and appreciate them.
-That way they "continue to shine."
-Thanks for sharing, and I
hope you are doing better
by writing this, doing the
book, and reading what others
are writing and saying.
-Hopefully, the burden of
tears gets less and less, my friend.
-You have a big heart, too.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Robyn.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very nice tribute poem,
and lovely thoughts using
tears as the theme.
-I think we always have
to hold friends and loved ones
close in order to remember
them and appreciate them.
-That way they "continue to shine."
-Thanks for sharing, and I
hope you are doing better
by writing this, doing the
book, and reading what others
are writing and saying.
-Hopefully, the burden of
tears gets less and less, my friend.
-You have a big heart, too.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you big, sweet girl.
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You are very welcome, Robyn.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, praise God for His compassion and that He never"wastes a hurt" as Rick Warren said. It is a comfort that He cares and remembers our tears and we as a collective body grieve with you.
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Yes, praise God for His compassion and that He never"wastes a hurt" as Rick Warren said. It is a comfort that He cares and remembers our tears and we as a collective body grieve with you.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you, sweetie.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, praise God for His compassion and that He never"wastes a hurt" as Rick Warren said. It is a comfort that He cares and remembers our tears and we as a collective body grieve with you.
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Yes, praise God for His compassion and that He never"wastes a hurt" as Rick Warren said. It is a comfort that He cares and remembers our tears and we as a collective body grieve with you.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I loved this. Not only for the reason you wrote it but for many other reasons. I've cried so many tears in my lifetime for so many reasons. Big hugs and thank you my friend.
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I loved this. Not only for the reason you wrote it but for many other reasons. I've cried so many tears in my lifetime for so many reasons. Big hugs and thank you my friend.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you! I?m sending hugs.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
If you check the notes at the top, it is incomplete telling the posts remain in your portfolio. Excellent ABAB and the flow gives it an easy read. Sad and yet a wonderful thought
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If you check the notes at the top, it is incomplete telling the posts remain in your portfolio. Excellent ABAB and the flow gives it an easy read. Sad and yet a wonderful thought
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Barb. I saw that and tried to fix it. Grrrr... ha
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