Finches
Our year-round feeder friends33 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Being a big fan of birds, I love your pleiades poem. They are so cute and hilarious and you've captured their antics to an F. :)
Great luck to you in the voting booth with this fine and uplifting poem. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Being a big fan of birds, I love your pleiades poem. They are so cute and hilarious and you've captured their antics to an F. :)
Great luck to you in the voting booth with this fine and uplifting poem. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad to meet another fan of these fun lil fellas - thank you!
Comment from lauralumummu
I love it! I miss the birds I won't be seeing them for a few months. A great entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing some spring to cheer us up. All the best, Laura.
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I love it! I miss the birds I won't be seeing them for a few months. A great entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing some spring to cheer us up. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
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Oh my goodness, we have them year round...their numbers vary, but I wouldn't know what to do without them! Thank you for stopping by!
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely Pleiades Poem! I don't know if it had to rhyme but your rhymes flow naturally and of course, there's so much alliteration of f- and s- words! And I feel the fluttering, frenzied antics of finches in the poem!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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A lovely Pleiades Poem! I don't know if it had to rhyme but your rhymes flow naturally and of course, there's so much alliteration of f- and s- words! And I feel the fluttering, frenzied antics of finches in the poem!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hooray! I am so glad you enjoyed these lil guys - they're so fun, aren't they? Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nice Pleiades poem. I love the birds at my own feeder year round. Your poem describes how meaningful their antics are to us. Image is gorgeous. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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This is a very nice Pleiades poem. I love the birds at my own feeder year round. Your poem describes how meaningful their antics are to us. Image is gorgeous. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the lil guys - they really are great fun! Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Pleiades poem about the Finches coming around in your garden to cheer you up with their cheerful chirps of delightful songs. The birds excited chirps just wake me up a few minutes ago at 5AM.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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A very well-written Pleiades poem about the Finches coming around in your garden to cheer you up with their cheerful chirps of delightful songs. The birds excited chirps just wake me up a few minutes ago at 5AM.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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That sounds like ours...they must be cousins those talkative lil' guys! Thank you for the review!
Comment from AvL
Ahhh, more poetry for birdbrains ... I approve! Line two is chirpfully charming, and alluringly alliterative. Five finch-feathers.
AvL
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Ahhh, more poetry for birdbrains ... I approve! Line two is chirpfully charming, and alluringly alliterative. Five finch-feathers.
AvL
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the finches - they really are fun! Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
What a delightful poem! Virtual 6. I love watching birds, too, so your poem and chosen picture struck a chord with me. Imagery is beautifully portrayed ("bird ballet") in skilful ABAB rhyming and lines of 10/8 syllables for a lilting rhythm.
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What a delightful poem! Virtual 6. I love watching birds, too, so your poem and chosen picture struck a chord with me. Imagery is beautifully portrayed ("bird ballet") in skilful ABAB rhyming and lines of 10/8 syllables for a lilting rhythm.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the finches - they really are fun! Thank you so much for the virtual!
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I've been watching silvereyes eating and frolicking in my plum tree this afternoon. The tree is alive with happy chattering.
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I could sit and watch and listen to them for hours! We have so many different kinds.....it's like Grand Central Station some days! ;-)
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There's been a lot of predator-trapping in our area, so the bird life is getting more prolific here, which is wonderful. But it does mean that the birds will get the plums rather than me!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a delightful write about finches and the fun they bring to the bird table as they drink and bathe and enjoy the spring, a joyous write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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What a delightful write about finches and the fun they bring to the bird table as they drink and bathe and enjoy the spring, a joyous write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the finches - they really are fun! Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a darling finch poem in Pleiades form (one of these days, I will get used to spelling that). I love, love, love the F alliteration with "Flit and flutter," "Fun yet frenzied", "Finches are favorite friends" and also 'b' alliteration in "bird ballet." This is the kind of poem that gets inspirational juices going for a bird-loving reader! Fun photo, too.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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This is a darling finch poem in Pleiades form (one of these days, I will get used to spelling that). I love, love, love the F alliteration with "Flit and flutter," "Fun yet frenzied", "Finches are favorite friends" and also 'b' alliteration in "bird ballet." This is the kind of poem that gets inspirational juices going for a bird-loving reader! Fun photo, too.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed the finches - they really are fun! Thank you!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt.
Your Finches verse is well written and well rhymed.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt.
Your Finches verse is well written and well rhymed.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Sharon, for your time.