Titillating
Seeing her for the very first time41 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is extremely well done, following all the parameters of the contest and with an excellent art choice. Extremely deserving of the six. I simply love it. Favorite line is line 2. We experience truly joy in our bodies when we witness beauty. GREAT JOB and good luck in the contest. You should do well. I want to enter this one as I have never done one of these, but time may not allow it. In my personal opinion you should do extremely well in the booth!
WENDY
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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This is extremely well done, following all the parameters of the contest and with an excellent art choice. Extremely deserving of the six. I simply love it. Favorite line is line 2. We experience truly joy in our bodies when we witness beauty. GREAT JOB and good luck in the contest. You should do well. I want to enter this one as I have never done one of these, but time may not allow it. In my personal opinion you should do extremely well in the booth!
WENDY
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Wendy, oh my goodness! What a great start to my last Sunday of the year! I am very grateful for your six-star review and good wishes. Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I found it to be very interesting and well constructed, and I really enjoyed reading it. You captured the essence of a dancer. Nicely done.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I found it to be very interesting and well constructed, and I really enjoyed reading it. You captured the essence of a dancer. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Sandra, good day, thank you taking the time to read and comment on my poem!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
Titallating", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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Titallating", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Duchess, thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem.
Dear Anon,
you're very welcome.
God bless and Happy New Year,
the Duchess
Comment from RShipp
A brave man!
You followed the Pleiades form required nicely.
I thought each of your "t" phrases built nicely to teh conclusion.
Good luck in the contest.
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A brave man!
You followed the Pleiades form required nicely.
I thought each of your "t" phrases built nicely to teh conclusion.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem.
Comment from BeasPeas
What a wonderful Pleiades poem. I so enjoyed reading it. Great word choices and theme. We can be mesmerized by someone special. They can do no wrong and do seem to be "a goddess" (or god). Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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What a wonderful Pleiades poem. I so enjoyed reading it. Great word choices and theme. We can be mesmerized by someone special. They can do no wrong and do seem to be "a goddess" (or god). Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Marilyn, thank you!
Comment from Sallyo
A bold suitor to invite a ballet star to dance... only kidding! This is one of those unexpected words and, as the third of this form I've encountered, somewhat different in that it takes an adjective rather than a noun. Nice variation!
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A bold suitor to invite a ballet star to dance... only kidding! This is one of those unexpected words and, as the third of this form I've encountered, somewhat different in that it takes an adjective rather than a noun. Nice variation!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you, it was fun to let the verses unfold unto themselves.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A tantalising and tremendous write filled with technical dance moves and heartfelt tingling sensations. I am tickled pink by your words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A tantalising and tremendous write filled with technical dance moves and heartfelt tingling sensations. I am tickled pink by your words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Dolly, I smile back! Thank you for your kind words!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of seeing the Titillating lady for the very first time. Smiles is very-good and using the word
(Trepidation) for the letter T to tell us readers, why she's was so captivating,
Gert
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Hello unknown author of seeing the Titillating lady for the very first time. Smiles is very-good and using the word
(Trepidation) for the letter T to tell us readers, why she's was so captivating,
Gert
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Gert, thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem. I enjoyed the challenge of this poetic style.
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You are welcome Unknown
Gert
Comment from Janet Foor
Very well done with lots of alliteration (which I love) and the requirements of the contest are met very nicely.
Good topic and complementary artwork.
Blessings for a Happy New Year
Janet
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Very well done with lots of alliteration (which I love) and the requirements of the contest are met very nicely.
Good topic and complementary artwork.
Blessings for a Happy New Year
Janet
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Janet, thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem. I enjoyed the challenge of this poetic style.Very Happy New Year!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, I don't know if this has been voted on yet or not. You may want to make an amendment. You have entered a 9-line poem in a 7-line poem contest!!!
Now, about the poem itself... I loved it!!! There are places where one line runs directly into the next... as line 6 to line 7, and line 3 to 4. I really loved these sets. The last line is also a real winner!
If I had to suggest, I would say your best bet is to emit lines 2 and 8 for the contest. It's a wonderful poem... just not a Pleiades. Good Luck! :)
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Hello Author, I don't know if this has been voted on yet or not. You may want to make an amendment. You have entered a 9-line poem in a 7-line poem contest!!!
Now, about the poem itself... I loved it!!! There are places where one line runs directly into the next... as line 6 to line 7, and line 3 to 4. I really loved these sets. The last line is also a real winner!
If I had to suggest, I would say your best bet is to emit lines 2 and 8 for the contest. It's a wonderful poem... just not a Pleiades. Good Luck! :)
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Thanks I just miss read the rule..I like your suggestions very much
