Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This shows both the promise and curse of the way you choose to run your life. It is short and sweet and well illustrated. It reminds us to be thankful.
Keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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Any time, danp

dp

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Heaven's Gate", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Dan. That's quite an interesting story in your poem. There are requirements to pass through the gates of heaven but the other gates have a different standard.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Amen to that! When we hit those pearly gates, we can rest assured that life will be wonderful because only God's children who believe in Him will be allowed in!
But, Hell has no set structure and as you said, it has no borders and everyone is welcome! Too bad when they find that Hell is a real place and they are destined forever to pain and suffering. They've been warned over and over but they don't listen!
I loved your poem and the pictures you provided are perfect! Great job!!
Patty

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

I absolutely love this. First for the spiritual message of living eternal life as a worthy soul so to speak and going to hell for not living a godly life on earth, but also for the earthly message of hiring those most qualified and allowing only those who will add to our society into the country as opposed to letting every rapist, child sex trafficker and drug addict in, and creating our own hell.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dan,

Welllll... yuck. These images are both beautiful and horrifying, huh? Makes you want to make sure you're doing your best to see the RIGHT image at the right time, yes???

Good to see you posting, btw. Thanks!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. No grammatical errors. I like this poem. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!Nice job.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well and clearly said.
Your message here is a good one and matches the wonderful pictures perfectly.
Thank you for sharing this serious piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

How true. I wish ore senators and congressmen understood this. When Obama left office, he loudly protested the idea of a wall at the border. When he built his House in DC, it had a high wall around it.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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Comment from Aussie

Excellent

I choose Eternal Reality. Then again, it's up to St Peter if he lets you in. Bible tells us these things; God makes choices, He knows our hearts and only He sets our feet on golden shores. Well done poet.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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