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God Omnipotent Omniscient Omnipresent Does Deeds

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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This is an interesting piece. Something that makes us think. I don't think all things are acts of God, as we all have free will, but this is wonderfully written. Great job

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019

Comment from Lobber
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Hello-
You bring up a very good point- it's wrong to challenge God's actions for by his very omnipresence the question of "Why" goes beyond His Realm - Lobber

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from DonandVicki
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I have been reviewing your stories and they all are very compelling. I enjoy reading your authors notes as much as your short stories. Your compassion shows in your words.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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In this piece, I find truthful comments on the power of God--His unique, ultimate power--and how He loves us all. I must point out, though, that God DOES do miracles.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

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Hi there, as usual I can see that you have such deep faith and I'm happy for you. I can understand the son's question to his father. If there were a God and he or she is to be so good then why impose all the suffering? To try us the believers would say. Really? So what sense is there in that? I would say. Ulla.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Sally Law
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You have described God in the purest ways as he is all these things and loves us so. I enjoyed this and the teachings of the teacher to his son.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally ;+)

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written word-fiction about the act of God that man cannot control. God has only good intentions for man, but sometimes we think we know better and screw up God's plans.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Bonjour Patita
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Hi there,

Thank you for sharing your insights as to a conversation between a father and son about the nature of God.

Who else should a child discuss these important matters with? And, it isn't truly important if a reader agrees with your point of view - it is the story of human nature and learning that counts.

Great job - I look forward to reading more of your work,

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Raul1
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I like how you structured this poem. I like how you talk about God and this poem is interesting. He is someone who watches over us. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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This is so true. There are some minor errors in spelling and grammar but I only say that because I am an English major, but I read your notes and I realized they were done for affect.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019