Chip's Poetry
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Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: This is a smart 2-4-6 poem. You have handled it very cleverly. If you don'r win in the contest, you should come in ahead of second place.(smile)
This is good. You are good too. God Bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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HELLO POET: This is a smart 2-4-6 poem. You have handled it very cleverly. If you don'r win in the contest, you should come in ahead of second place.(smile)
This is good. You are good too. God Bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, rhonnie.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Simple endearing and uplifting poem. Summer fun with the kids is always a great topic to write about. Best of luck. The picture adds character to the poem.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Simple endearing and uplifting poem. Summer fun with the kids is always a great topic to write about. Best of luck. The picture adds character to the poem.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Maria.
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You are welcome.
Comment from humpwhistle
Looks like a lovely, loving scene. But, I'm afraid the photo upstages the poem. If I read your poem, without the photo, I'm not particularly impressed. Perhaps I review differently from others. To me, the words should be the stars. The image takes a backseat.
Just the way I see things.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Looks like a lovely, loving scene. But, I'm afraid the photo upstages the poem. If I read your poem, without the photo, I'm not particularly impressed. Perhaps I review differently from others. To me, the words should be the stars. The image takes a backseat.
Just the way I see things.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Lee.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is a lovely entry for the writing prompt.
You fully meet the criteria and the presentation is lovely.
It's great to spend time with your children, especially when they are doing the thing that they love most - we get extra enjoyment from seeing how happy they are.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
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reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Hello :)
This is a lovely entry for the writing prompt.
You fully meet the criteria and the presentation is lovely.
It's great to spend time with your children, especially when they are doing the thing that they love most - we get extra enjoyment from seeing how happy they are.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Debra!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 2-4-6 poem and entry for the contest
with the addition of the clever rhymes and the perfect topic
as summer is here for most people.
Excellent choice of art work
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
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reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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You've written an excellent 2-4-6 poem and entry for the contest
with the addition of the clever rhymes and the perfect topic
as summer is here for most people.
Excellent choice of art work
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
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Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Robert.