Letters to a Hurricane
Just for fun ABC's of Hurricanes.30 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
Incredibly detailed weather report here. From A to Z, you are covering such a wide range of verbs. I like just joking for the letter 'j'.
Great.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Incredibly detailed weather report here. From A to Z, you are covering such a wide range of verbs. I like just joking for the letter 'j'.
Great.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thanks! I might try some different weather conditions too:) I so appreciate your review and input:)
Comment from mancub
This is a challenging type of writing and you have done a wonderful job, your work is filled with very strong and distinctive words, you tell your story well and embrace the nature of the destruction of a hurricane. trying new things when it comes to writing can be fun and at times abit scary, kind of like the hurricane, but writing your descriptive verses you have done well, I am sure many will enjoy this, Thank you for sharing, Mancub
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This is a challenging type of writing and you have done a wonderful job, your work is filled with very strong and distinctive words, you tell your story well and embrace the nature of the destruction of a hurricane. trying new things when it comes to writing can be fun and at times abit scary, kind of like the hurricane, but writing your descriptive verses you have done well, I am sure many will enjoy this, Thank you for sharing, Mancub
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to give me such a detailed perspective. That means so much! Makes me glad that you saw it as a story and not just a science lesson. I was worried that it wouldn't be interesting enough to anyone but me LOL. Thank you again for your input!
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Your welcome, keep up the creativity!
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I will try!
Comment from LIJ Red
I admire anyone who attempts to write an ABC acrostic poem, so I call your post excellent, but I doubt that I shall tackle an ABC poem any time soon...I also hope to never see another hurricane...
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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I admire anyone who attempts to write an ABC acrostic poem, so I call your post excellent, but I doubt that I shall tackle an ABC poem any time soon...I also hope to never see another hurricane...
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the "excellent" review. I was just playing around with that style and ended up liking it. It stretched my brain:) I hope also. that you never see another. I've never been in one, just saw them on tv.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written abcederian poem. The normal ABC poem consists of five lines with four consequetive letters of the apple and the fifth line may be any letter of the alphabet.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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A very well-written abcederian poem. The normal ABC poem consists of five lines with four consequetive letters of the apple and the fifth line may be any letter of the alphabet.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review and info too! I need to read about different styles and try them.Thank you for the compliment:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words are descriptive, Tina. I like how you expressed your thoughts/feelings on the subject of hurricanes. Your lines flow well with some great alliteration. Did you skip 'X; intentionally? Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Your words are descriptive, Tina. I like how you expressed your thoughts/feelings on the subject of hurricanes. Your lines flow well with some great alliteration. Did you skip 'X; intentionally? Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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It was unintentional! Thanks for telling me. I fixed it as well as I could with! Thank you for the review and saying it flowed well!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, this was really a fun and well-done acrostic story, Tina -- you should consider writing another for the contest coming up later this month!! :) :) This took time, I know, but it doesn't read like it took alot .... just reads and rolls right through smoothly! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Well, this was really a fun and well-done acrostic story, Tina -- you should consider writing another for the contest coming up later this month!! :) :) This took time, I know, but it doesn't read like it took alot .... just reads and rolls right through smoothly! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the compliment! Smoothly is something I am actually trying to improve upon.I'm not sure about the contest thing as there are sooooo many talented and creative people on FS. We will see if a good idea comes to mind! I appreciate you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow Tina! This poem is so expressive and full of explosive words that describe the Hurricane, I felt I was in one reading your words. I loved: 'Gallavanting Gusts! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Wow Tina! This poem is so expressive and full of explosive words that describe the Hurricane, I felt I was in one reading your words. I loved: 'Gallavanting Gusts! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you Dolly! That is High Praise coming from you, because I really respect your work. Let's hope we don't see many of these this year :-) thank you again!
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Thank you Dolly! That is High Praise coming from you, because I really respect your work. Let's hope we don't see many of these this year :-) thank you again!
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Thank you Dolly! That is High Praise coming from you, because I really respect your work. Let's hope we don't see many of these this year :-) thank you again!
Comment from Bill Schott
This abecedarian poem, Hurricane ABC's, delivers the typhonic descriptions along with an impressive collection of alliterative phrases that bring us through the storm. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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This abecedarian poem, Hurricane ABC's, delivers the typhonic descriptions along with an impressive collection of alliterative phrases that bring us through the storm. Nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much! It was fun to do! I appreciate your review!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Tina,
Ha ha ha! This is a very clever, creative write. I am certain you hit all the high points in this poem. Nothing to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Hi Tina,
Ha ha ha! This is a very clever, creative write. I am certain you hit all the high points in this poem. Nothing to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Jan:) I did fix a misspelling someone found, before you or anyone saw it, haha! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from lyenochka
Brilliant! You did a super job creating alliteration in every single line with the starting letter in this ABC poem. Very descriptive and you taught me a new word - "wuth!"
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Brilliant! You did a super job creating alliteration in every single line with the starting letter in this ABC poem. Very descriptive and you taught me a new word - "wuth!"
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Oh my goodness! ...I went and fixed it. Thanks for telling me. I do better WUTH you watching my back.
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Lol. I thought you really meant 'wuth' as in 'wuthering heights.'
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No, I am not that
intelligent, lol:)
