God Speaks
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Comment from Gail Denham
I hope that in my walk with God, people can see Jesus and the Holy Spirit in my talk, my walk - and in my trust in Him. A family situation is at hand and again last night, I offered it up to God - to let Him care for it. I must do that to maintain calm.
Good reminder poem
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I hope that in my walk with God, people can see Jesus and the Holy Spirit in my talk, my walk - and in my trust in Him. A family situation is at hand and again last night, I offered it up to God - to let Him care for it. I must do that to maintain calm.
Good reminder poem
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from dmt1967
The picture is good and gels with the words. The poem is very religious and tells of a man who makes a statement, 'wark with my god,' and feel his love. Thank you for sharing.
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The picture is good and gels with the words. The poem is very religious and tells of a man who makes a statement, 'wark with my god,' and feel his love. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a strong invitation to others to follow in the steps of Jesus and earn an eternal life. It reminds us we have to take care of the world.
I think the in the second stanza immortal living should be immortal life.
In the last stanza, it makes more sense for save to be make.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This is a strong invitation to others to follow in the steps of Jesus and earn an eternal life. It reminds us we have to take care of the world.
I think the in the second stanza immortal living should be immortal life.
In the last stanza, it makes more sense for save to be make.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I really enjoyed your freestyle verse. You are so good with acrostic too. I usually favor rhyme and flow but this was very enjoyable. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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I really enjoyed your freestyle verse. You are so good with acrostic too. I usually favor rhyme and flow but this was very enjoyable. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this write lends itself easily to the described form of the message, as witness of his commitment to our heavenly Father and is a satisfying read in its free verse form - as always with this writer, both a heartfelt tribute and directional guide...
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In my opinion, this write lends itself easily to the described form of the message, as witness of his commitment to our heavenly Father and is a satisfying read in its free verse form - as always with this writer, both a heartfelt tribute and directional guide...
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from robyn corum
ALD,
This is a very interesting post about walking with our God and Creator. Can you imagine walking and talking with Him - getting to ask any questions you wanted??? Wow. So cool! Thanks!
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ALD,
This is a very interesting post about walking with our God and Creator. Can you imagine walking and talking with Him - getting to ask any questions you wanted??? Wow. So cool! Thanks!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This thought-provoking spiritual piece is very moving--encouraging us
to strive to KNOW God more deeply and to know that, though Heaven
awaits the believer, God expects us to care of the Earth while we're blessed to live here.
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This thought-provoking spiritual piece is very moving--encouraging us
to strive to KNOW God more deeply and to know that, though Heaven
awaits the believer, God expects us to care of the Earth while we're blessed to live here.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from visionary1234
A sweet work from the heart, Al, though a little didactic in style. But your passion and commitment are very clear. Well done on the free verse ACROSTIC. Not easy to do! :)S
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A sweet work from the heart, Al, though a little didactic in style. But your passion and commitment are very clear. Well done on the free verse ACROSTIC. Not easy to do! :)S
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from tfawcus
Congratulations on your first acrostic free verse poem. You show the advantages of walking with your God, demonstrating the great faith you have in Him.
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Congratulations on your first acrostic free verse poem. You show the advantages of walking with your God, demonstrating the great faith you have in Him.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
Comment from WryWriter
How wonderful to be able to walk and talk with God our creator! To fulfil what He desires of our lives. The artwork is beautiful! Enjoyed reading your free verse poem!
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How wonderful to be able to walk and talk with God our creator! To fulfil what He desires of our lives. The artwork is beautiful! Enjoyed reading your free verse poem!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
