Of Chess and Partnership
I see now, playing got us where we are today...26 total reviews
Comment from Christine C Autry
Yes I enjoyed this very much . Thank You for sharing your poem. It was very good the whole concept of a chess board was good. Thank you I appreciate it.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Yes I enjoyed this very much . Thank You for sharing your poem. It was very good the whole concept of a chess board was good. Thank you I appreciate it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thanx for stopping in for the read and review, Christine -- I appreciate your lovely comments! :) :) Know that you are welcome to stop by any time...no contest necessary -- I'll be sure to have a glass of iced tea waiting for you! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from country ranch writer
The games the same the rules just change to accommodate ones life as pn gets older. Nice work up for your poem and working things out for ones selves.u
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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The games the same the rules just change to accommodate ones life as pn gets older. Nice work up for your poem and working things out for ones selves.u
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your read and review - much appreciated. :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Miss Sherry
Love this! Things change as our health deteriorated or burdens stress us. Mother nature adjusts our thermostats bother down and up. The real comfort o f love is to have each others in the darkness and the light. I like this very much.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Love this! Things change as our health deteriorated or burdens stress us. Mother nature adjusts our thermostats bother down and up. The real comfort o f love is to have each others in the darkness and the light. I like this very much.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Oh, thank you so very much for the review and those uplifting comments, Sherry -- you have certainly ended my week on a happy note! :) :) And your so right about the thermostat....just like in a game of chess there are the long pauses in there, too! :) ;) Thanx for stopping in this evening and have a great weekend! :) Yvette
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You are most welcome!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Dear Yvette,
Oh! How right you are about the stages of marriage. And how wonderful that those stages do exist! I have loved them all. But most all, after forty years of marriage, I still look for my husband in a crowd, am thrilled by his hand in mine, and feel a sense of urgency if he is gone too long...
I loved every morsel of your exceptionally well-crafted poem. And I cannot wait to read the first chapter of our novel. Just have to find time to luxuriate in its content!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Hello Dear Yvette,
Oh! How right you are about the stages of marriage. And how wonderful that those stages do exist! I have loved them all. But most all, after forty years of marriage, I still look for my husband in a crowd, am thrilled by his hand in mine, and feel a sense of urgency if he is gone too long...
I loved every morsel of your exceptionally well-crafted poem. And I cannot wait to read the first chapter of our novel. Just have to find time to luxuriate in its content!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Oh wow! I have to tell you, Diane -- your review has ended my week on a good and happy note so no need to wait on more!! :) ;) Thank you, thank you for your review...and, yes, I'm just like you: I love having my hubby with me...he's been traveling a bit much for my tastes (lol!) and it's actually good to have him home this weekend! :) ;) ;) Wouldn't trade any of those stages for anything and we're only at 30! :) Thanx for the smiles and have a wonderful weekend, ma'am! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Mastery
Extremely clever entry in the contest, Yvette. It must have taken some thought of your happiness and happy loved-filled marriage in order to put forth such an ingenious poem. Best of luck. I hope you win, you certainly deserve to. My favorite lines are:
"And, yes, there's still need to 'check that king',
but the bed will do . . . most days!"
Bless you, my friend. Bob
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Extremely clever entry in the contest, Yvette. It must have taken some thought of your happiness and happy loved-filled marriage in order to put forth such an ingenious poem. Best of luck. I hope you win, you certainly deserve to. My favorite lines are:
"And, yes, there's still need to 'check that king',
but the bed will do . . . most days!"
Bless you, my friend. Bob
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bob -- always appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Teresa Alford
Great title, it lends some mystery to the poem Good luck in the contest. I hope you win. The two shades of font make it stand out. Good flow! TA ";~)
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Great title, it lends some mystery to the poem Good luck in the contest. I hope you win. The two shades of font make it stand out. Good flow! TA ";~)
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Teresa -- I do always enjoy hearing from you! :) ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed the dual colors -- I hesitated a bit, but then just went for it! :) :) And a double thanx for the good wishes -- I take all of them I can get - LOL! :) Yvette