Did You Count to Ten?
Keeping little boys focused in the morning...26 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
You could write a counting poem which pertains to little girls. This poem looks professional and it could be part of a book. Good luck in the contest.
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You could write a counting poem which pertains to little girls. This poem looks professional and it could be part of a book. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for counting to ten with me, Earl! :) Have a colorful week ahead! :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really cute and fun with a very catchy and clever rhyme scheme. It has a little sing along type vibe to it that children could probably remember. I like it and how well you presented it. Great job and well done!
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This is really cute and fun with a very catchy and clever rhyme scheme. It has a little sing along type vibe to it that children could probably remember. I like it and how well you presented it. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for counting to ten with me, Jeffrey! :) Have a colorful week ahead! :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This is a lot of fun to read and even more so to succeed in focusing children into their daily tasks. Your poem is lively, sounds like a little game and the pretty rhyme enhances the sense of "fun and games"
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This is a lot of fun to read and even more so to succeed in focusing children into their daily tasks. Your poem is lively, sounds like a little game and the pretty rhyme enhances the sense of "fun and games"
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for counting to ten with me, Donka! :) Have a colorful week ahead! :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I liked and enjoyed this kiddie's motivational poem; keeping the kids focused with ten jobs (like commandments) in the morning; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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I liked and enjoyed this kiddie's motivational poem; keeping the kids focused with ten jobs (like commandments) in the morning; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for counting to ten with me, DR ALCREATOR! :) Have a colorful week ahead! :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, Mystery Author. I like the idea of routine as we can all earn from that. Good job with the color scheme. I enjoyed that, too. I believe young kids will really like this. Your rhymes are good, too. Thank for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
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I enjoyed your poem, Mystery Author. I like the idea of routine as we can all earn from that. Good job with the color scheme. I enjoyed that, too. I believe young kids will really like this. Your rhymes are good, too. Thank for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for counting to ten with me, Jan! :) Have a colorful week ahead! :)
Comment from Miss Sherry
Love this - it could come in handy in many households. Maybe even for old disorganized gals like me. Good luck in the contest - you have given us a smile and a delight.
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Love this - it could come in handy in many households. Maybe even for old disorganized gals like me. Good luck in the contest - you have given us a smile and a delight.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for counting to ten with me, Sherry! :) Have a colorful week ahead! :)