Need in Silhouette
Visible only when your light finds them...28 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
a very deeply passionate look at the dark and dangerous streets. it's too late for charity, it's going to take something a lot bigger. something infinite, perhaps. a fantastic piece, Yvette. you've been on a contest roll, lately. Congrats.........meeshu
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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a very deeply passionate look at the dark and dangerous streets. it's too late for charity, it's going to take something a lot bigger. something infinite, perhaps. a fantastic piece, Yvette. you've been on a contest roll, lately. Congrats.........meeshu
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanx for your words as always, meeshu -- I always appreciate your stopping by! ;) You and Cyndy be sure to have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from lyenochka
So very skillfully done, Yvette! You chose words that really painted the picture in this brief form. I especially like your pivot line of "clothed in donations" and then the poem transitions us to "hope in redemption's light."
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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So very skillfully done, Yvette! You chose words that really painted the picture in this brief form. I especially like your pivot line of "clothed in donations" and then the poem transitions us to "hope in redemption's light."
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanx for your wonderful review, Helen -- always love it when you stop by! ;) Make sure to have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
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You, too, Yvette! Hugs!
Comment from His Grayness
Very, very well done indeed with exceptional reader grip from the outset, including excellent photography! I cannot offer any
ideas to improve this work and sincerely thank this author for a truly excellent work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Very, very well done indeed with exceptional reader grip from the outset, including excellent photography! I cannot offer any
ideas to improve this work and sincerely thank this author for a truly excellent work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your read and review, Vance -- your comments are always appreciated! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
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thanks so much Yvette, for your lovely review and stars, so sincerely appreciated indeed! HIS GRAYNESS Vance
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion a starkly realistic message, well constructed and meaningful in its presentation, both in verse and image. It is fully compliant with the prompt and dramatic in presentation. I can offer no suggestion for improvement - it is perfect as it is. Best wishes in the contest...Eve
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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In my opinion a starkly realistic message, well constructed and meaningful in its presentation, both in verse and image. It is fully compliant with the prompt and dramatic in presentation. I can offer no suggestion for improvement - it is perfect as it is. Best wishes in the contest...Eve
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your detailed review, Eve -- it is always appreciated when another author actually takes the time to point out particulars about a work! :) :) And thanx for stopping in, ma'am -- you're welcome to just stop in any time! ;) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
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You are very welcome, Yvette - a stunning and important write, and yes, I will pray for those less fortunate. I do support the Salvation Army, because I am personally aware of their efforts on behalf of those in need, because I share your concern. Thank you for your Christmas wish. I wish you the same this Christmas and happiness and prosperity in the coming year...Eve
Comment from royowen
A deeply poignantly sad, emotive work, that speaks to the soul, rather the eyes and ears that perceive it Yvette. No wonder God says give with the heart not the conscience or compulsion. A wonderful effort, a great and deeply moving poem, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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A deeply poignantly sad, emotive work, that speaks to the soul, rather the eyes and ears that perceive it Yvette. No wonder God says give with the heart not the conscience or compulsion. A wonderful effort, a great and deeply moving poem, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the heartfelt review, Roy -- it is always appreciated when another author actually 'gets' what you're trying to say! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season (not that you need reminding of that) and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Gloria ....
I very much like how you've drawn in tattered clothing donations although not exactly said that way have used the "magic" of words through allusion. Even without the artwork your message is very clear.
Great job and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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I very much like how you've drawn in tattered clothing donations although not exactly said that way have used the "magic" of words through allusion. Even without the artwork your message is very clear.
Great job and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Oh, Gloria, you get me! :) Thanx for the lovely comments -- it is always appreciated when another author actually takes the time to point out particulars about a work! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice picture worked up for this short poem. It doesn't really matter the donated clothes they wear cast shadows at least it covers their body and they are proud to wear them as some are not as fortunate. Be proud of who you are and hold your head high for there will be better days in the future for others too. Never put one down for what they wear or the shadows they cast. Don't be so easy to cast the first stone till you walk a mile in their shoes. It might be you one day standing there in the shadows.
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Nice picture worked up for this short poem. It doesn't really matter the donated clothes they wear cast shadows at least it covers their body and they are proud to wear them as some are not as fortunate. Be proud of who you are and hold your head high for there will be better days in the future for others too. Never put one down for what they wear or the shadows they cast. Don't be so easy to cast the first stone till you walk a mile in their shoes. It might be you one day standing there in the shadows.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Not sure where you got the impression there was any animus or looking down on people here as none was written or felt. Merry Christmas to you and your family -- prayers are certainly with you.
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I just felt this was a put down
Comment from Connie Frazier
You've done a lot in five lines here. I love how "tattered" and "shadows" play together audibly. Also the line "clothed in donations" is such a creative and efficient description. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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You've done a lot in five lines here. I love how "tattered" and "shadows" play together audibly. Also the line "clothed in donations" is such a creative and efficient description. Very well done.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for your detailed review, Connie -- it is always appreciated when another author actually takes the time to point out particulars about a work! :) :) Be sure to spare a prayer or more for all those in need especially during this holiday season and have a very warm and wonderful time with family and friends -- celebrate life!! :) ;) :) Yvette :)