senryu (little girl)
dancing with Dad31 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet a delightful write and I remember doing that when I was small, I wish you luck with the contest, endearing and warm words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This is a sweet a delightful write and I remember doing that when I was small, I wish you luck with the contest, endearing and warm words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you for this great review for my poem, Dolly. I'm pleased you can relate to the dance with Daddy. Thank you for your comments and good luck wish.
Comment from etreefrog
Such a touching and creative response to this prompt! The picture actually takes away from your poem since people won't realize how evocative your words alone are. Wonderfully done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Such a touching and creative response to this prompt! The picture actually takes away from your poem since people won't realize how evocative your words alone are. Wonderfully done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Erik, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery of the words for the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks!
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is so cute and so terrific! From the first line to "waltz of love" This just oozes sweetness and innocence... things we all long to regain from our childhood. Love the idea here and the delivery is just as good. Great presentation... pic, color, font, everything! A sure contender!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This is so cute and so terrific! From the first line to "waltz of love" This just oozes sweetness and innocence... things we all long to regain from our childhood. Love the idea here and the delivery is just as good. Great presentation... pic, color, font, everything! A sure contender!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you for this great review for my poem, Kelly. I'm pleased you enjoyed the dance with Daddy. Thank you for your kind comments and good luck wish.
Comment from donette1914
so adorable and when she gets married she still will dance on her dad's toes.
I'll look forward to your work next time
the words go well with the poem you made
I hope for the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 27 2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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so adorable and when she gets married she still will dance on her dad's toes.
I'll look forward to your work next time
the words go well with the poem you made
I hope for the best in the contest
it was a pleasure
donette1914 oct 27 2018
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you for this great review for my poem, donette. I'm pleased you enjoyed the dance with Daddy. Thank you for your comments and good luck wish.
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is evident even in this short form. Well done, Writer. so sweet. good luck..
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is evident even in this short form. Well done, Writer. so sweet. good luck..
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, meeshu, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks!
Comment from Anntonette
The little girl and her father has a special bond when it comes to dancing. The father is her role model, great way of showing that in this piece. We look up to our fathers, watch what they do.
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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The little girl and her father has a special bond when it comes to dancing. The father is her role model, great way of showing that in this piece. We look up to our fathers, watch what they do.
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Anntonette, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks!
Comment from Galactia
Well that is fantastic little 3'5'3 poem. You can picture the little girls feet upon their dad's shoes doing the waltz. This is a strong contender, So much imagery in such few lines. Amazing Talent you have with your pen,.
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Well that is fantastic little 3'5'3 poem. You can picture the little girls feet upon their dad's shoes doing the waltz. This is a strong contender, So much imagery in such few lines. Amazing Talent you have with your pen,.
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Tia, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery of the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks!
Comment from susand3022
Oh my God! I love this poem! I can see this little girl's face beaming up at her daddy as he takes little steps around the floor smiling down at his little girl. Makes you remember when we were little and we danced on our daddy's shoes. :)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Oh my God! I love this poem! I can see this little girl's face beaming up at her daddy as he takes little steps around the floor smiling down at his little girl. Makes you remember when we were little and we danced on our daddy's shoes. :)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Susan, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you can relate to the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent entry in the contest. You should do very well in the voting booth. I enter a lot of contests but seldom win. I hope you do better.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This is an excellent entry in the contest. You should do very well in the voting booth. I enter a lot of contests but seldom win. I hope you do better.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, Thomas, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks for your good luck wish.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A very sweet image is created in the mind with your poetic words about a dance. I love the "waltz of love." A great little 3-5-3. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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A very sweet image is created in the mind with your poetic words about a dance. I love the "waltz of love." A great little 3-5-3. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you Cindy, for your kind review and comments for my poem. I appreciate your time to share your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoyed the daddy-daughter dance. Thanks!