Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

This is written beautifully. Don't know if this contest is still on or not...I'll check...but this is a winner. I love autumn, and winter. And this!!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018

Oh, yes, the contest is still on and the voting has begun. Many thanks for your very kind praise of "Ms. Winter," Irish Rain.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I really like this entry for the Personification of Winter. You have used a great cadence with the rhyming and meter to make this a fun and enjoyable read. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

I am delighted you enjoyed ?Ms. Winter? and truly appreciate your kind praise.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This is an interesting phenomenon You're talking about. If it's a person, then she's not a phenomenon. I think that is what You're implying in your poem. I like it. Nice work!

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Ms. Winter is more a paradox than a phenomenon. She?s a beauty who can cause heat in a man?s loins, but she lacks any real warmth of her own. I am delighted you like the poem.

reply by Raul1 on 31-Aug-2018

You're welcome. Thanks for clearing it up! Now I know.

Comment from RFL

Excellent

This is a wonderful entry for the contest, and a creative personification of winter. The image compliments you words beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. RFL

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

I am delighted you enjoyed my personification of Winter, my least favorite season. Many thanks for your kind praise.