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Comment from Hardwick Dennard V
Wow.. this is insightfully and spiritually inspiring.
i love it and your and style is very authentic i would say
i haven't been doing poetry for that long but this is my opnion
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Wow.. this is insightfully and spiritually inspiring.
i love it and your and style is very authentic i would say
i haven't been doing poetry for that long but this is my opnion
Comment Written 05-May-2021
Comment from nomi338
Excellent advice and direction. Those who agree with you are probably already doing this. Those who disagree, will snort derisively and think you a fool. We must pray for those misguided ones for their fate is due for some comeuppance in the days ahead.
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Excellent advice and direction. Those who agree with you are probably already doing this. Those who disagree, will snort derisively and think you a fool. We must pray for those misguided ones for their fate is due for some comeuppance in the days ahead.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Beautiful picture and a very well written sentence. This must have been quite a challenge to say so much, so succinctly and even though it was written almost to years ago, it is so appropriate for today. You have given good advice that is timeless. We should respect the gifts that God has bestowed on us. I pray daily that I am listed in the good book.
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Beautiful picture and a very well written sentence. This must have been quite a challenge to say so much, so succinctly and even though it was written almost to years ago, it is so appropriate for today. You have given good advice that is timeless. We should respect the gifts that God has bestowed on us. I pray daily that I am listed in the good book.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from Spitfire
You spell it out: what works and what doesn't. Personally I think it should in two paragraphs. Nice touch with the reference to respect human and natural resources.
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You spell it out: what works and what doesn't. Personally I think it should in two paragraphs. Nice touch with the reference to respect human and natural resources.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The way I understand how God works, is that we must have faith. With faith comes the works, but without faith the works won't help. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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The way I understand how God works, is that we must have faith. With faith comes the works, but without faith the works won't help. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from w.j.debi
What a challenge to make a sixty word sentence, but you did and on an important topic. You offer wise advice about trusting in God and using His gifts properly.
Your notes made me laugh, especially the sentence that begins, "Some wise reviewers..."
Thank you for reviving this post.
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What a challenge to make a sixty word sentence, but you did and on an important topic. You offer wise advice about trusting in God and using His gifts properly.
Your notes made me laugh, especially the sentence that begins, "Some wise reviewers..."
Thank you for reviving this post.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
Comment from Megan3333
This is a really good poem. I agree with a lot of the things you're saying. Like people definitely need to stop wasting earths resources. I also think we need to be kind to everyone.
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This is a really good poem. I agree with a lot of the things you're saying. Like people definitely need to stop wasting earths resources. I also think we need to be kind to everyone.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love the conclusion of your poem use :never misuse Human Resourcse, Nature wisely and God's gifts properly. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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I love the conclusion of your poem use :never misuse Human Resourcse, Nature wisely and God's gifts properly. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
Comment from CandySoda777
The way you organized your writing made it kind of confusing to read, I know that there was a limited word count, but still. I do agree with the concept/meaning of it, though. Keep writing!
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The way you organized your writing made it kind of confusing to read, I know that there was a limited word count, but still. I do agree with the concept/meaning of it, though. Keep writing!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
Comment from richie b
Alcreator,
A true sentence to live by. Brotherly love reigns, total
respect for creation and Worship of our Heavenly Father.
We all need to think along these values. Our moods
do interfere. Your sentence suggests a true way to live.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Richie b
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Alcreator,
A true sentence to live by. Brotherly love reigns, total
respect for creation and Worship of our Heavenly Father.
We all need to think along these values. Our moods
do interfere. Your sentence suggests a true way to live.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020