Does This Suggest?
The signs of Spring--a kyrielle36 total reviews
Comment from Angela Post
I enjoyed your kyrielle poem. I like the images you are painting of the robins, flowers and also the dandelions coming. There is a lot of colour description in your poem which helps me to imagine the spring.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I enjoyed your kyrielle poem. I like the images you are painting of the robins, flowers and also the dandelions coming. There is a lot of colour description in your poem which helps me to imagine the spring.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, Angela, for sharing my spring poem. I am especially pleased you like how I employed color.
Comment from tfawcus
Three blessings and a curse! I suspect that there's a true gardener speaking here! LOL
I enjoyed your Kyrielle. Yes, all that you describe suggests that Spring is in the air!
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Three blessings and a curse! I suspect that there's a true gardener speaking here! LOL
I enjoyed your Kyrielle. Yes, all that you describe suggests that Spring is in the air!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Tony, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.Yes, spring is in the air, but so is the cold breath of winter.
Comment from ameen786
To me it definitely suggests that you are a winner; what a beautiful imagery in lovely/vivid verses and perfect rhymes; so sorry for not having a six. Thank you for the treat and good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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To me it definitely suggests that you are a winner; what a beautiful imagery in lovely/vivid verses and perfect rhymes; so sorry for not having a six. Thank you for the treat and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, ameen, for your kind praise of my spring poem.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
What a fun spring poem with the hopping robins. I see hopping
robins as they try to mate. Our snow is melting. You must be
further south. Yes, you added in the creeping charlie and dandelions.
Brooke loved her dandelions. Enjoy the weekend. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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What a fun spring poem with the hopping robins. I see hopping
robins as they try to mate. Our snow is melting. You must be
further south. Yes, you added in the creeping charlie and dandelions.
Brooke loved her dandelions. Enjoy the weekend. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem and your kind comments. I do hope you see those hopping robins soon, and, yes, I was thinking of Brooke when I wrote in the dandelions.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle. At the end of Winter we are looking out for all the signs that suggest that Spring is near. The birds return from last summer's flight and the flowers start to bloom.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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A very well-written Kyrielle. At the end of Winter we are looking out for all the signs that suggest that Spring is near. The birds return from last summer's flight and the flowers start to bloom.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing my spring poem, Sandra, and your kind praise.
Comment from rspoet
You've written a fine Kyrielle poem for the contest
with a solid repeating line that connects the stanzas nicely.
With excellent rhymes and very good meter,
the poem reads quite smoothly.
It seems robins are a popular subject these days.
Excellent art work to match words.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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You've written a fine Kyrielle poem for the contest
with a solid repeating line that connects the stanzas nicely.
With excellent rhymes and very good meter,
the poem reads quite smoothly.
It seems robins are a popular subject these days.
Excellent art work to match words.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a great entry for the Kyrielle poetry contest. You developed a good verse with Spring as your theme. It flowed well and met the syllable count. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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This is a great entry for the Kyrielle poetry contest. You developed a good verse with Spring as your theme. It flowed well and met the syllable count. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A wonderful Kyrielle themed poem with the rhyming patterns and stanzas perfectly done. You have used a lot of lively adjectives to describe the scenes of spring. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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A wonderful Kyrielle themed poem with the rhyming patterns and stanzas perfectly done. You have used a lot of lively adjectives to describe the scenes of spring. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Cindy, for reviewing my poem and your high praise.
Comment from Gloria ....
I like this one very much. First off I'm a big fan of birdies and you've drawn them into a lovely poem in celebration of spring's possible arrival, testy as it might be.
A finely crafted work of art and I wish you the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I like this one very much. First off I'm a big fan of birdies and you've drawn them into a lovely poem in celebration of spring's possible arrival, testy as it might be.
A finely crafted work of art and I wish you the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Gloria, for reviewing my poem and your high praise.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a delightful poem, love the form and the anticipation of spring and all the delightful nature that it brings, so positive and a joy to read, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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This is a delightful poem, love the form and the anticipation of spring and all the delightful nature that it brings, so positive and a joy to read, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my spring poem, Dolly. Many thanks for your kind praise.