Unwanted Dog
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks, an easy-said realistically organised, put interestingly about managing life in crisis, passionate caring for animals, rescue job over, dogs start going home beyond Heritage Hall; I liked.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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This speaks, an easy-said realistically organised, put interestingly about managing life in crisis, passionate caring for animals, rescue job over, dogs start going home beyond Heritage Hall; I liked.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Autobiography not about dogs.
However, appreciate you taking the time to read my autobiography and to write a review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I didn't think the title you give yourself "The Unwanted Dog" was correct. You built a story about a boy who went through hell and managed to stay one step away from his demons. Then this last part where you are actually taken in by a man who wanted to be your dad, well that's simply a spectacular way to close it down. So good my friend so very good indeed! xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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I didn't think the title you give yourself "The Unwanted Dog" was correct. You built a story about a boy who went through hell and managed to stay one step away from his demons. Then this last part where you are actually taken in by a man who wanted to be your dad, well that's simply a spectacular way to close it down. So good my friend so very good indeed! xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sankey
Top Finale mate. I enjoyed every minute of reading this and I look forward to more of it as you have time. I don't know why people don't like biographies. I love em! Now for some suggestions...I looked up adorned in my dear old Oxford Dictionary I was given in Sixth Grade (end of Primary or Middle School re following... I suggest adding some words...adorned (myself in)blue
I knew when to leave [not] well enough alone
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Top Finale mate. I enjoyed every minute of reading this and I look forward to more of it as you have time. I don't know why people don't like biographies. I love em! Now for some suggestions...I looked up adorned in my dear old Oxford Dictionary I was given in Sixth Grade (end of Primary or Middle School re following... I suggest adding some words...adorned (myself in)blue
I knew when to leave [not] well enough alone
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Appreciate the comments, support, "catches", and six stars.
Glad you enjoyed my autobiography.
Comment from country ranch writer
,so glad he came to get you it takes time to put the Ted tape into the works to get you released from that he'll hole and getting you out of that horrid he managed to come get you after all.the happiest day of your life to walk out of there for once and for all
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,so glad he came to get you it takes time to put the Ted tape into the works to get you released from that he'll hole and getting you out of that horrid he managed to come get you after all.the happiest day of your life to walk out of there for once and for all
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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It was indeed the happiest day of my life.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.