2017 JAPANESE POETRY
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Comment from cumulus365
I enjoyed reading this one. It sounds like an opening of a chapter. There is a lot of thought into these three lines. The field being fallow after a harvest was done is just astounding. Harvesting is a process that takes up a whole day as you have it desolated feel as the day's done. You done well.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading this one. It sounds like an opening of a chapter. There is a lot of thought into these three lines. The field being fallow after a harvest was done is just astounding. Harvesting is a process that takes up a whole day as you have it desolated feel as the day's done. You done well.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Wow, you have a very good understanding of this haiku thank you, my friend.
gypsy
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow!
What a beautifully well written haiku, dear Gypsy.
Outstanding word economy.
Beautifully created concrete imagery in your fist and second lines.
And what a satori!
It's no wonder you're the teacher of this very spiritual form of poetic expression.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Wow!
What a beautifully well written haiku, dear Gypsy.
Outstanding word economy.
Beautifully created concrete imagery in your fist and second lines.
And what a satori!
It's no wonder you're the teacher of this very spiritual form of poetic expression.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Dean, I am immensely grateful for the stellar review and six stars. Thank you, my friend.
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from LisaD123
This is a deeply evocative haiku and the image complements the words perfectly. The verbs are very carefully and cleverly chosen and help to create the image in the reader's mind. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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This is a deeply evocative haiku and the image complements the words perfectly. The verbs are very carefully and cleverly chosen and help to create the image in the reader's mind. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thank you, my friend, I am immensely grateful for the generous review.
Blessings,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>
Comment from c_lucas
The fields in the Fall take on an empty look. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very descriptive read. There is very good imagery.
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The fields in the Fall take on an empty look. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very descriptive read. There is very good imagery.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thank you, my friend, I am immensely grateful for the generous review.
Blessings,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and Poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>Haiga class starts on May 1st <>