You Don't Know Me
Trying to make them understand37 total reviews
Comment from sandy montgomery
I enjoyed this piece very much. The art was wonderful and fit your poem perfectly. The flow of your piece was steady and pleasing. I thought your notes were a nice addition. Thank you for sharing your work.
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I enjoyed this piece very much. The art was wonderful and fit your poem perfectly. The flow of your piece was steady and pleasing. I thought your notes were a nice addition. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from frierajac
There is a good match with the illustration and the poem. It is truthful and the way it is written has candor, something usually valued with the young as long as their manners aren't inconsiderate. Where I live in the back country, there is still
hand outs of 'clean waste' in the back country. Many people stand in line for it.
Even the ones better off.
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There is a good match with the illustration and the poem. It is truthful and the way it is written has candor, something usually valued with the young as long as their manners aren't inconsiderate. Where I live in the back country, there is still
hand outs of 'clean waste' in the back country. Many people stand in line for it.
Even the ones better off.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from marybell1
I just loved your rhyming poem "You don't know me". It rhymed beautifully and your sketch was really appropriate. It would a lively poem which children could learn from.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
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I just loved your rhyming poem "You don't know me". It rhymed beautifully and your sketch was really appropriate. It would a lively poem which children could learn from.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from artemis53
i love your poem as well as the notes. When first married I remember squeezing a nickel until it screamed just as your Mother. I consider that to be one of the best times in my life. I like the character of this child. She is thankful and has the strength not to be mortified by other children.
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i love your poem as well as the notes. When first married I remember squeezing a nickel until it screamed just as your Mother. I consider that to be one of the best times in my life. I like the character of this child. She is thankful and has the strength not to be mortified by other children.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
Comment from bertranclan
Excellent rhyming children's poem reflecting on class and the haves and have nots. Yet you really were a "have!" Puts things in perspective. Thanks for posting!
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Excellent rhyming children's poem reflecting on class and the haves and have nots. Yet you really were a "have!" Puts things in perspective. Thanks for posting!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a heartwarming poem that really touched my heart. Your poem is well rhymed and flowed beautifully with great sentiments and I wish you well in the competition, love Dolly x
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This is a heartwarming poem that really touched my heart. Your poem is well rhymed and flowed beautifully with great sentiments and I wish you well in the competition, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an extremely warming and beautifully constructed poem - definitely one for children and the child in us all - rhyming almost perfect, but then, the message is the thing, and the read will fill it in - a truly inspired and inspiring work - one written for a children's book...
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In my opinion, an extremely warming and beautifully constructed poem - definitely one for children and the child in us all - rhyming almost perfect, but then, the message is the thing, and the read will fill it in - a truly inspired and inspiring work - one written for a children's book...
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great entry with an awesome message. No one really knows about another person until s/he walks a mile in their shoes.
Your words/lines flow smoothly with great rhymes. The art/picture is perfect.
I like how this is a conversation with the character in the poem.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
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This is a great entry with an awesome message. No one really knows about another person until s/he walks a mile in their shoes.
Your words/lines flow smoothly with great rhymes. The art/picture is perfect.
I like how this is a conversation with the character in the poem.
Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
Comment from Janet Foor
AnA sweet and thoughtful childrens rhyming poem. Sad and poignant - a poem we could all learn a lesson from.
Lovely abcb rhyme and good picture to capture the readers attention.
Well done
Janet
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AnA sweet and thoughtful childrens rhyming poem. Sad and poignant - a poem we could all learn a lesson from.
Lovely abcb rhyme and good picture to capture the readers attention.
Well done
Janet
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
this is a nice read for people of any age, sad but uplifting in the end, simply written with potentially a good lesson for kids. I love the picture it goes perfectly with your story. the little girl looks so cute and happy! thanks for sharing and good luck!
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this is a nice read for people of any age, sad but uplifting in the end, simply written with potentially a good lesson for kids. I love the picture it goes perfectly with your story. the little girl looks so cute and happy! thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017