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Comment from apky
I expect my extended hand will most likely by grabbed by someone... - just a wee glitch: "will most likely BE grabbed by..."
Of course, there are many, many stories. Those are just a few. My hands cared for my dying mother and performed tasks no son should ever have to. My hands have labored at jobs to survive that were an insult to their talents.
I simply loved how you use words to convey so much.
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I expect my extended hand will most likely by grabbed by someone... - just a wee glitch: "will most likely BE grabbed by..."
Of course, there are many, many stories. Those are just a few. My hands cared for my dying mother and performed tasks no son should ever have to. My hands have labored at jobs to survive that were an insult to their talents.
I simply loved how you use words to convey so much.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from robyn corum
Michael,
You old softie. *smile* This was so sweet. A completely different take on the challenge than the others I have read. And nice!
One note:
1.) Shouldn't my well/being be the focus of all?
Thanks!
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Michael,
You old softie. *smile* This was so sweet. A completely different take on the challenge than the others I have read. And nice!
One note:
1.) Shouldn't my well/being be the focus of all?
Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from dmt1967
I don't usually like these kinds of stories but this one, I couldn't stop reading. It tells a sorry tale of people expecting one thing but getting another. Thank you for sharing.
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I don't usually like these kinds of stories but this one, I couldn't stop reading. It tells a sorry tale of people expecting one thing but getting another. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from fimarie78
This is a superb piece. I found it very engaging and it would be great to see it done visually with the accompanying music, I love Bach. The way you have taken the idea of a hand as the hook for the piece is very cleverly done. I particularly liked the inner voice of the baby/child. best wishes, Fiona.
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This is a superb piece. I found it very engaging and it would be great to see it done visually with the accompanying music, I love Bach. The way you have taken the idea of a hand as the hook for the piece is very cleverly done. I particularly liked the inner voice of the baby/child. best wishes, Fiona.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written prose on hands. We seldom think about the importance of our hands, we use it in different ways each day without thinking about it. Sometimes we misuse our hands and do wrong deeds we shouldn't do, we cannot do much without our hands.
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A very well-written prose on hands. We seldom think about the importance of our hands, we use it in different ways each day without thinking about it. Sometimes we misuse our hands and do wrong deeds we shouldn't do, we cannot do much without our hands.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
There is no shame in having a tender side for those who need it. You know you can handle a bully with no problem at all so that's a plus for your side. Yet you take gentle care of loved ones who need it most
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There is no shame in having a tender side for those who need it. You know you can handle a bully with no problem at all so that's a plus for your side. Yet you take gentle care of loved ones who need it most
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2017