Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Chapter Sechs part eine"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from light
You left us with a lot to think about. It sounds like he is going to get other opinions on the situation. There were many of these mysteries after the war. A lot of expensive art was never recovered. Still an interesting read.
Elaine
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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You left us with a lot to think about. It sounds like he is going to get other opinions on the situation. There were many of these mysteries after the war. A lot of expensive art was never recovered. Still an interesting read.
Elaine
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from MelB
Hi Barb, this is another well written chapter. My only complaint is it wasn't longer, but it does leave me wanting more of the story.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Hi Barb, this is another well written chapter. My only complaint is it wasn't longer, but it does leave me wanting more of the story.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Russian Mafia, stolen goods, recovery plan continues; I liked the theme, fast forward plot progression in good flow of thoughts, catchy beginning and planned curious ending; I enjoyed the conversation.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Russian Mafia, stolen goods, recovery plan continues; I liked the theme, fast forward plot progression in good flow of thoughts, catchy beginning and planned curious ending; I enjoyed the conversation.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from apky
I enjoyed this read, however I have to admit this is the first chapter I've read. The dinner seems to end rather nebulously, I feel, so that there might be one or two people still at the dinner table. But as I've said, I need to go back and read previous chapters first in order to properly connect. Your idea of providing the cast of characters is wonderful!
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed this read, however I have to admit this is the first chapter I've read. The dinner seems to end rather nebulously, I feel, so that there might be one or two people still at the dinner table. But as I've said, I need to go back and read previous chapters first in order to properly connect. Your idea of providing the cast of characters is wonderful!
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I fail to see how this being the first chapter you read why I should be penalized for it.
Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
I know the feeling. I still read my book that's in print and find that I want to make changes! It's a sickness. But I didn't spot anything glaring, it all looked good to me!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Barbara,
I know the feeling. I still read my book that's in print and find that I want to make changes! It's a sickness. But I didn't spot anything glaring, it all looked good to me!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
I thought the eating and details from chewing to other was very different, but with your style of writing, I suppose necessary. Nothing wrong, just thought it odd with your style that's all. Still an interesting story.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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I thought the eating and details from chewing to other was very different, but with your style of writing, I suppose necessary. Nothing wrong, just thought it odd with your style that's all. Still an interesting story.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I've used meals before for conversation.
Comment from Heidi M
I'm glad Anderson knows why Shana tried to run away. It gives him a clearer picture of her character.
Sounds like a dangerous job to infiltrate Morzov's organization.
(Nazis) -Delete apostrophe
Your story continues to develop and maintain interest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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I'm glad Anderson knows why Shana tried to run away. It gives him a clearer picture of her character.
Sounds like a dangerous job to infiltrate Morzov's organization.
(Nazis) -Delete apostrophe
Your story continues to develop and maintain interest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another fine chapter that leads me to believe there is more going on than what I'm picking up on at the time. Maybe even Anderson knows more than we've come to believe. Great job. :-)
I don't usually bother with making notes or suggestions on your work as I know you will catch them on your own. However, I've just added to of the simplest as those are the ones I read right through without ever catching. :-)
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>>"I didn't directly do anything to cause her (to) leave.
>> "I'll speak with Jeff. He may be (our) best shot."
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thanks for sharing another fine chapter that leads me to believe there is more going on than what I'm picking up on at the time. Maybe even Anderson knows more than we've come to believe. Great job. :-)
I don't usually bother with making notes or suggestions on your work as I know you will catch them on your own. However, I've just added to of the simplest as those are the ones I read right through without ever catching. :-)
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>>"I didn't directly do anything to cause her (to) leave.
>> "I'll speak with Jeff. He may be (our)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you. I have made both corrections.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, great chapter with this and well written as usual. The conflicts are gathering and I can't wait to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Hi Barbara, great chapter with this and well written as usual. The conflicts are gathering and I can't wait to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent post, and I'm glad I have six stars to award. You're doing a great job moving the story along. It says a lot about Shana that she was willing to take her chances and leave the apartment because she heard Anderson say he was afraid he'd lose custody of his daughter and didn't want to cause a scandal. Jeff seems like a man with lots of talent. Anderson knows where and when to use him. There seems to be more to the painting that the Russians are desperate to get. Will be so curious to know what. judi
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Excellent post, and I'm glad I have six stars to award. You're doing a great job moving the story along. It says a lot about Shana that she was willing to take her chances and leave the apartment because she heard Anderson say he was afraid he'd lose custody of his daughter and didn't want to cause a scandal. Jeff seems like a man with lots of talent. Anderson knows where and when to use him. There seems to be more to the painting that the Russians are desperate to get. Will be so curious to know what. judi
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
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You're welcome. I really love the story. I'm finding it quite suspenseful. judi