Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. This story keeps getting better and better. I hope they make good on their escape. I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter in this writing. Great work.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017

Thank you for the wonderful review,
Rhonda

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I don't think I would want to offend either one. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017

Thank you so much. Yeah, they are both pretty tough... so it is with the young...

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine chapter, Rhonda--and edge-of-your-seat, spine-tingling suspense--oh wait, that's the electric football game I left on my chair, and am sitting on--spine-tingling story anyway!

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017

You are so incredibly funny, my friend!! You always lift my spirits!
Rhonda

reply by Mike Stevens on 19-Jan-2017

Thanks, Rhonda--do you think you can say that to my mom and dad? They aren't convinced!

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017

Parents are often our biggest critics. Ask mine, they'll tell you!!

reply by Mike Stevens on 20-Jan-2017

No, actually, my mom and I share the same sense of humor. Speaking of funny, that's what I was attempting, without a net or safety harness of any kind! When in doubt, make fun of yourself or your family, like I told someone once, what am I going to do, kick my own ass? (I could take me, I'm a wuss!)

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017

That is sooo funny, and a point well taken!

reply by Mike Stevens on 20-Jan-2017

Thanks, Rhonda!

Comment from Sixty70

Excellent

I'm so intrigued! Hufacs - humans for advanced civilizations. Based on animals!

Now I'll pop over to Amazon and find you. Based on the summary provided, you've built such an interesting world.

I have only one nit: "He promises they won't harm the nasty sheep, but will drive them through a gate he's going to leave open and right into town." The present tense verb seems inconsistent with the rest of the piece.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017

Thank you for the wonderful comments, my friend!!
You were so right on the tense issue. I fixed it!!

Thanks for your great review,
Rhonda